Madelyn

@kyronthearcanin

Thanks! And I get it, sometimes I even confuse myself with worlds that I built. 🤣

Oh good it’s not just me! 😅🤣

Hmmm…. Good question. I guess I’d like to know if the characters are believable. This first chapter I don’t have as many problems with… The second chapter is where things seem to kind of get weird. I’m a pantser,…

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@thearcaneaxiom

(Warning: existential rant incoming, only read if your comfortable with these harder subjects.)

(Warning acknowledged.)

Then one must ask, what caused reality itself?

(The definition of reality I’m using here is “the state of existing”. Just to be clear.) Perhaps there are two kinds of realities: the reality that has always been,…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Wow, that book sounds epic! I should check it out. Even though I’m not too keen on the ghost part…you know…is it horror or are the ghosts like fairy tale ghosts?

So where’s Shiloh at? Is she nearby cause Felicity (me 😉 ) is up in the balcony and I could come down and meet her if you want?

@princesachronicle22

JALENE (or…[Read more]

@booksbyjana

Great idea!

The scene I am writing right now is the resolution to the climax. The villain has reached her just end, and the heroine is being reunited with her friends. Good has overcome evil, and truth has conquered over lies.

“Hope in Your Eyes” by Tony Gram (Instrumental Epic Cinematic)

Mood: Hope, Victory, Inspiration,…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

I really like this! I’m not usually into reading fantasy that much because excessive world building leaves me often confused, but you did a good job giving us just enough info about the world without it being overwhelming. Also, I love the mysteriousness. Is there anything specific you want comments on?

Part 2!

All through supper Little One tried to focus on her siblings’ conversation. She tried to be normal, but her Bag of Entertained Thoughts felt so heavy, she kept figeting with it. If anyone noticed, no one seemed bothered.

That night Little One could hardly sleep, haunted by images of Undiscerned at work stoking and bellowing the burning…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Wow! I’m on the edge of my seat! Nicely done, Solfyre!

Awh, y’all are so awesome! Thank you. That makes my day. I’m excited to keep sharing it with you!

@whalekeeper

Aw that’s sweet! For her sake, we must resume! 😉

Love your pfp by the way! Is it one of your characters?

@thearcaneaxiom

(Yeah, I think it’s a good summery. It feels like the word curiosity doesn’t give a complete connotation though.) I’m not sure, perhaps there are different degrees of what curiosity is? Does that stray from the heart of a question? (I would say that curiosity is the right word, but it just feels less driven to me for some reaso…

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@princesachronicle22

It’s literally been a whole month since anyone was on here!!! I’m going to presume it’s ok if I RP randomly. I miss this topic and want to revive it!

Jalene

I watched as the girl next to me exclaimed, “Are you cosplaying as someone too? Because I’d love to know this character.”

Instantly I bristled. Was she trying to say t…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Have you seen the NeverEnding Story? The Nothing in there is a darkness that swallows everything. It symbolizes the world without imagination.

@freedomwriter76 hey I think it’s ur turn btw 😊

@seekjustice

I’m currently learning Hawaiian (though I finished my course, so I’m not actively learning anymore, just practising every now and then), Australian Sign Language, Scottish Gaelic and Romanian (I also love Eastern European languages!). I’d love to learn Welsh next.

Oh wow! That’s really neat. Is there a big difference between Austr…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

I LOVE the mood boards!! I really like Kylie already!! And Sato Akela…he seems like a very good villain 😨

Thanks! That’s good. I was digging into his back story the other day and realized that he was part of the CCP (Chinese Communist Party), got fired, and came to the U.S. to try to start over. His love for money and power g…[Read more]

@awsumfaith

I really like your character Naolin!! I love the ocean and a sea fairy sounds amazing!

@awesomefaith

The picture of Arwen is really sweet! Good job!

@godlyfantasy12

I love seeing all your characters and how distinct they are. Ara with the knife is eye opening. 😉 😂😂

@thearcaneaxiom

Is that not perhaps the definition of a desire for a deeper understanding? Does there still feel like there’s something missing though?

(Curiosity sums it up pretty well, in my opinion.) Do you think there’s something missing?

(It was in Maine, most of them weren’t immigrants, they were Polish citizens still. MathCamp, while bei…

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