Lydibug

@loopylin

Sebzter

Inside the classroom, moments before being snatched, Seb’s inner dream shrieked for dominance. He turned around, and for a split second, he could see a complex diagram of his and the crowd’s movements, like shimmery white ghosts. With a tug of the plot strings, he yanked himself forward, and warped through the crowd. The doo…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Dante

“Alright. You’re the bait.” His reflective eye flashed for a moment in the dark, then he was gone.

The mob rushed past. As Dante hoped, they were more concerned with catching Sebastian, who was the original offender.

Seb raced ahead, then ran suddenly into an empty classroom. The people at the front of the crowd fol…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

So glad y’all are safe!! Yes, God is so amazing!! 💕💕

@loopylin

Splendid *offers Dante a butterscotch scone in thanks*

Sebzter

“After a precursory kick of inappropriate nature, I made a face.” Seb yanked at his lower eyelids, and his squishy smile widened in the overwhelming white light emitting from his eyes. The rhythm was strong, and he held it back in order to talk sensibly. “Now they want…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Apparently Dante is immune to my current writing block

Dante 

Running was one of Dante’s best skills. He kept pace easily with Sebastian as excited children crashed through the kitchen after them. His jacket flew behind him. Pastries tumbled out of the pockets. He turned to look behind, running almost sideways now, and la…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

*Waves* 😝 Heya. You probably already know how you want the characters to end up, but I’d also recommend plotting out what to do in the middle, or at least have bullet points for each chapter.

Having some kind of outline helps the pacing a lot, which I can see you’re worried about rushing or slowing. Leon’s alcoholism and R…[Read more]

@whalekeeper 😊

That’s actually what my hair looked like before I grew it out

@loopylin

She’s so cuuuute XD Hey, and she has my hair style too!

Wyoh, may your floors be always covered in lego and d4s

@whalekeeper XD oh, no, the goats live in the yard

@rae Cool! I miss living with animals

NEVER STICK YOUR HAND IN A ADULT GOAT’S MOUTH THOUGH. THEY’RE TEETH ARE NASTY!

👍 wasn’t planning on it

@loopylin

*Snorts* Just imagining someone with a pet goat around the house –

@rae You got that right @loopylin

Sebzter

The best part about the whole thing was how, in utter confusion in the darkness, those in the halls joined the bullies in a tidal wave of people. They had no idea what the rush was about, but followed quickly.

The leaders, however, were perfectly aware of what was happening, insomuch as revenge was…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium Thank you!

@keilah-h Yeah, they make the character more fun to write and add more options for expressing body language

Alas, we have been cursed to be faceless nobodies, for they have indeed vanished.

Aw, but I liked my smug crow face 🙁

@whalekeeper

A ram began to chew on his pants.

Oddly relatable. The people I’m house sitting for have goats and one of them kept nibbling at my jeans today because apparently I wasn’t feeding her fast enough.

@keilah-h

Jaylen’s character design sounds really cool! I love the four wings

@rae

Okay 😂 Um, I took the prompt “fairy tale” and went for exactly what Winston would picture as a fairy tale.

Winston

When Winston woke, he found real life to be all the more unrealistic.

The young demon-born rolled onto his back, and rubbed grass clippings out of his hair. Around him green hills rustled in the breeze, and a blinding blu…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I’ve read some more of your book! I think I stopped at chapter 16.

The only big thing I’ve noticed so far is that Sef’s expression of her grief feels a little unrealistic. Of course anyone would be devastated if their only family they had left was taken away, that part makes sense. I just felt that her hurting herself reall…[Read more]

Or at least stop bugging us or we will report you to the authorities…

die wyoh