Rylie Goodwin

@whalekeeper

Hmm, interesting. It makes sense. There are many ways and categories for character development and arcs, which is a good thin as there are many Authors as well.

I think with people saying their characters are both Passive/Active they are actually referring to a character being Active in the A Story and Passive in the B Story. I have…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

*Blinks*

That would be…utterly terrifying.

And I don’t even know that much about Marvel, but…

*Imagining the chaos*

*Grins*

@freedomwriter76

What’s your crossover? I don’t recognize most of the people, but I haven’t watched many movies so that’s not a surprise.

Wait, is it a Narnia fanfic? 0.0

CoN is one of my absolute all time favorite books series!!!! My siblings and I grew up listening to the Focus on the Family dramatized audio of the Chronicles, which are still…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

YES. I. AM.

But only for his own protection, so it’s a good thing, right? Of course right.

@freedomwriter76

Thank You!!! It’s an experiment. 😉

Is there anything you liked/thoughts/suggestions?

And yes, I think she is turning to kidnapping. XD

@koshka

Awww, thank you! For reading! My crazy opening! And liking it!

I’m glad you think so. Although I think there are some snotty Alwin chapters ahead. *Wry laugh*

Yes of course. That dreaded next chapter. Don’t worry, it will get worse. 😁😅

@hybridlore

Thank you! That means so much. I’m still trying to figure out my writing voice – or at…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

AHHHH, beautiful! Symbolic! Lovely! Suspenseful!

Alwin and William are so heartachally adorable. (Especially with you know what in the first chapter. *Glares at evil guard* *quietly stuffs Alwin in secret closet*)

@highscribeofaetherium (your were)

Thanks!! This is my second (third?) Try at the opening.

@koshka @sunny421 @freedomwriter @godlyfanrasy @joycalle …iforgotyourtag @Idon’tknowwhototag

Hi everyone! I know I’ve been floating about in shadowy silence, so I’m sorry if I haven’t commented on some of y’all’s excellent work. Maybe I’ll be able to go back and give some thoughts as I’ve really enjoyed reading them.

Anyway, now that long and…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I love the idea that “bad magic” is essentially rebellion against the Light, manipulating what was originally made to be a beautiful thing into a dark and twisted thing. It’s very good. If you’ve ever read Jack Zulu and the Waylander’s Key, you will have read one of my recent favorite books that addresses this in it’s themes. At…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Wow.

I love underground church stories, and that was with your beloved characters! A little quick of a turning, but still,

Wow.

I like this Peter. Thank you for sharing!

@godlyfantasy12

I’d love to tag along and see what they are, whether is a new forum or reusing an old one.

@godlyfantasy12

That’s perfect for Lyn.

And of course I love a good sibling relationship, especially TWINS!!

So, are either of the girl’s mother’s alive? (And if not…how did they die? [If you can say])

@freedomwriter76

AHHHH!!! Питер!!!

(Although, is this room being recorded, like is it bugged? =|)

@mineralizedwritings

That sounds fun (and cute)!

We got a speedball (nice but still cheap) sketching set with three mapping pens, two drawing, and a standardish one, then a set with some oblique nibs. We’re using Dr. Ph. Martin’s black star ink. I’d like to get a nicer set with a wooden holder but this works for now.

We’ve enjoyed it (my sister…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

GASP! You got dip pens?! My sister and I just got a sketching set to work with. (Haven’t drawn much more than a pile of rocks yet…)

I’m not typically much of a fan of manga styles, but he looks awesome! What ink are you using?

@freedomwriter76

Children of the Storm is the autobiography of Natasha Vins, who’s father was actually arrested do to his involvement in the underground church. I haven’t managed to read all of it (I also got The Rise and Fall of Mount Majestic at the same time…so I don’t really blame myself for getting distracted XD), but I’d still recommend…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

OH NO! I didn’t realize they went into East Germany, although that makes perfect sense knowing them.

I am so excited about this though! Could they perhaps be like Paul and convert a few guards?

@light-warrior-pen

Pet peeves? On romance? Neveeerrrrrr.

Actually, what @whalekeeper and @esther-c said. XD

Also, it’s probably connected, but when she is so determined to “stick with him” that she puts everyone in danger. Like when he gives her instructions to stay safe and she blatantly disregards them just to “be brave”. It just comes across…[Read more]