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Active 2 years ago- Rank: Wise Jester
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Sebastian Universe in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
’cause when we finally get squeezed out so you can get to know us, we explode everywhere with suppressed creative sauce.
Is Sebastian an introverted extrovert? Or an extroverted introvert? Or horseradish mustard?! (With glitter.)
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Koshka replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Aww, hedgehogs are adorable.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Behold, my WIP | The Purple Eyed in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Ooo, excerpts. Thank you for sharing! I like this Blair and Shannon. (Poetry, huzzah!)
I also relished the way you incorporated the poem he was reading into the opening. When the poem stopped and the dialogue began, it was like when the curtains on a stage are first pulled back.
I do agree that the descriptions were a little hard to get…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Sebastian Universe in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
YES Seb needs to be a graphic novel (and would probably be one of the only graphic novels I’ve ever read). One with Glitter and Color, and extra whip cream with sprinkles!!!
Honestly, Sebastian’s voice always reminds me of kid’s church stuff with it’s outlandish sparkle and unrealistic realness.
I’ll be stalking this page.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Sebastian Universe in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Wow. XD Hugo seems to have a habit of expressing himself too creatively for clarity. XD
Thanks for sharing! I shall now reference the poor ketchup bottle in vaguely shared humor at the first opportunity.
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
AHHHHHH!!!!
*Throws gigantic bag of confetti in air*
THATISSOAMAZINGIAMSOHAPPYFORYOU!!!!
*Plays a triumphant prelude on violin in the falling confetti*
AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!
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Koshka replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
All of those poor, dear, darling characters and you BEAT them! 😭 (
LEON!!NOOOO!!!!!)Just fyi, I’m taking some decently heavy college courses right now so if I don’t respond for a few days it doesn’t mean I’m ignoring you and your darlings. I read the posts that come through my email, but I just can’t find much time to be on here…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
AHA! Go ahead Fin! Give them a piece of their medicine.
I like this guy, if you an’t tell.
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Koshka replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
The twins
The sunlight on the water was beautiful, shimmering like some sort of live thing. Of course, it would be a whole lot prettier if he weren’t still liking salt from his fur.
Zlatan had flopped down in the shade of a small tree to rest, ears twitching as his eyes slid shut. Vulkasin sat down beside him, chewing slowly on a bit of dried…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
If he’s an animal he’s welcome. =)
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Koshka replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Sure! The Island is pretty much up for interpretation. There is at the moment a castle ruin and a lot of cliffs, so even a snow caped mountain would fit right in.
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Koshka replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Question 1: Well, it depends? My animals typically walk on their hind legs, can sprint/move quickly on two, but lope/run on all four. They use their front paws as hands. But for all this they are (Oh humbug to anyone who says it’s scientifically impossible) completely animal in shape, skeleton, form, ect. Their clothes and armor…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Oh, in actual years, Tripkin and Dalton are more like seven years old… I think? They measure time differently, and can live an unnaturally long time(for real squirrels).
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Mine walk sometimes on their hind legs, but run on all fours. (If a squirrel runs. XD I’m not sure what the right word for ground flying is.) If anyone has read Mistmantle, they’re a lot like that. (very animal like, but also of course, able to do things real squirrels can’t.)
Tripkin is around twelve, come to think of it, and…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Okay, here’s the entry. Y’all’s characters sound like such fun!
Because of my Squiggle Things small size, the normal/slightly choppy conditions write like Euroclydon. XD
Tripkin
“High side!” The words tore from his throat in two rough syllables. His dark furred friend flung himself up the tipping slope to join Tripkin.
Their raft evened out.…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Ooo, a tiger. He sounds interesting.
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Koshka replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Zlatan & Vulkasin
Water. Salt. Cold.
Not bitingly cold, not as cold as the snowmelt pools they’d learned to swim in, but an unceasing battering that tore at sodden fur. Vulkasin dug his claws into the wood vessel, grinning against the salt water air.
“How do they do this?”
“Who?” His brother’s low voice was barely audible over the…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Nyxie is so cute/hilarious/kinda crazy. XD He’s awesome.
Yeah, my book is kinda similar to Green Ember or Red wall when it comes to the whole clothes and weapons stuff. (My foxes are kinda my favorite with kilts and dirks…)
Thanks!
If your character was only ever all-animal here it should be fine.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Dalton
Treeknife. It’s what he is and what he will be as far down the road as he can see. It was a Treeknife that found him as a tiny kit, and it was a Treeknife who raised him up to be the squirrel he is. Oakorn was everything – a father, a mentor, and a friend. Little does Dalton realize, he was everything to that old Treeknife in return: a…[Read more]
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