Rylie Goodwin

This has brought to my attention that I don’t even have plot twists 😭😟

THIS is what goes for a plot twist in my stories: Bronwen and Muri (and Marea) have feelings *audience gasps*

Pretty sad lol

@theloopyone HELLO!!! I’ve heard so much about you (all good, no worries) I’m glad ya joined =D

I’m Ava, professional procrastinator and ward of LoopyLin. I like writing a whole slew of genres, but I’m currently most interested in westerns and survival stories.
(OOH @LoopyLin Fantasy x Western, cowboys and dragons EEE)
I got here late so I’ve…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Oh definitely, and it shows. I have one story that has almost the EXACT same plot as The Hatchet by complete coincidence. I read the book about 6 months after I figured out the plot of my own story and I was just like dangit.. got there a few years late lol

My writing style itself is heavily influenced by a few of my f…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Annia

Now that there was no more…no more…blood, she could come bounding over with as much energy as usual.

The fairy had been crying, her nose and cheeks all pink and rosey.

Oh, wait. She hadn’t introduced herself yet. She waved to the others.

“My name’s Annia Winston. Good to meet…[Read more]

@koshka @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

All right!

Reúven

The boy was lost. Reúven understood that: he had been too. Many, many times.

He held the door open, waiting to go, to look, to find. Because he was Reúven Elroi, and he would find. Just a moment for November to adjust to the light again.

“Do you two…ah, know your way around here?…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Alrighty then! Yeah no, they weren’t.

@elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Cécile

The poor fellow had been whipped again, and again. Angry red welts and abrasions crisscrossed in haphazard fashion. And this hasn’t been the first time, telling from the old scars these new ones covered.

She let out a few Algermain expressions l…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

So um, how have Dawson’s wip wounds been treated? Cause that might influence her response.

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12

Y’all…XD I think I like Joshua

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Annia

She slowly tore her eyes away from the fairy and settled them on the two newcomers everyone else had been looking for.

Tall, in kinda funny clothing. One over five and a half feet, the other closer to six and a half. She smiled and cocked her head, lightly bouncing on her toes.

The…[Read more]

I don’t think I have any antagonists that are clearly defined enough to add. I mean, ya kinda have to know who they are.

Anyone else?

@godlyfantasy12

I was wondering!

@freedomwriter76 godlyfantasy

Sounds great to me! Reúven likes little girls, and Viktor would love to meet them both again.

@freedomwriter76

Dawson, no!!

And he had better be careful, or he’ll get a military nurse called down on him.

Btw, Cécile was a fully trained nurse, on her way to becoming a midwife actually, when the war flared up again, and she got called into the reserves.

@theloonyone

Oh, it’s fine, but thank you for redoing it!

Your WIP premise is so creative! And I totally get the “my book is running away from me” feeling! XD it’s happening to me currently.

Although, I do have one story that took a very romantic turn like that. Although, I don’t know if it’s exactly a “romance” because although that part is a…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Cécile

Heavy footsteps echoed down to them, tensing the air. Someone was coming.

She placed a hand on Annia’s shoulder,  perhaps gripping a bit tighter than nesesary. The girl’s infront of them looked tense and ready to fight. Cécile bit her lip.

Two men walked around the corner, both dre…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Zlatan

“Well! Now that that’s settled, which, by the way took forever, you guys are really bad at communication, could we get going? I, for one, would very much like to find Lynnie. Would one of you like to guide us, or shall I? How bout you canine?”

Canine? First Wolfboy, now a word neithe…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @godlyfantasy12

Viktor

Something wasn’t right; this was no pleasant coincidence. Viktor’s mind spun as he took in November’s shaken state.

It wasn’t something on the outside, something tangible. It was something else.

Thoughts.

Forebodings.

Memories.

“That…ah…that would be nice. Better then traveling alone, I suppo…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Aannnndd I deleted my RP. Again.

*Dramatic sigh*

Cécile 

She walked at a brisk step, heeled boots clicking in an even rhythm.

This place was nice. Comfortably clean, full of fresh un-sterilized air, with no messy situations to clean up. And none of the incessant rocking of the hospital sh…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Do you want to introduce your characters, or me to go ahead?

@theloonyone

Greetings and welcome to the Kingdom of Pen!

I’m called Elishavet around here, and I mostly write realistic medieval fantasy, with a touch on the allegorical. (So fancy, I know. 😉 )

Your WorkInProgress sounds interesting! What is it about?

Also, short stories are awesome! I haven’t written many; in fact I think I’ve only written…[Read more]