Rylie Goodwin

(Tw- (this is probably my favorite show don’t tell, but my most gruesome chapter) shows a physical attack (beating her up) and cruel words. BUT DON”T WORRY it’ll all be better soon.)

Chapter 4

X392

I sat there for a long time, gritting my teeth, and trying to not scream my lungs out as I laid in the grass. My cut felt like there were hot…[Read more]

(Tw- None)

Chapter 3

Nathaniel

I started sweeping the front porch of the store, using hard big strokes to try to get the layer of dusty dirt off of it quickly.

I was about halfway done when I saw a woman and girl walking up the pathway. I stopped, to let the dust settle so it wouldn’t get in their eyes.

The woman was tall, and nice…[Read more]

(TW- mentions murder. Aka my Morally grey character’s past that makes him now morally grey 🙁

Chapter 2

Roger

After staring at the ceiling for a long time, I finally got up. There’s no way I could get to sleep. Not on a night like this… not this one. I got up and walked towards the window, the full moon sending light through it, but sto…[Read more]

I gripped the bars of the cell so hard my knuckles turned white.

I thought he had changed.

I thought he cared.

He did it.

The thing I never thought he would do.

I felt like I was in a haze.

The noise of chains met my ears.

He said he understood.

He helped me.

How could he?

I staggered and gripped the bars harder.

He said he…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

Lol, to be fair he emailed it instead of saying it on here XD. But he also gave me an essay of eveything wrong with it. BUT i’m not against critique, i’m definitely for it. But when your critique is against even proper writing… (like he thinks i should info dump at the beginning and not start in the middle of the scene???…[Read more]

@orielle21 Thank you! So if I go start posting my story on here would you like me to tag you? 🙂

@freedomwriter76 Thankkkksss ^-^ I’ll tag you when i do soon!

@gwyndalf-the-wise That’s totally okay, whatever is chill. Chapter 4 is the one that makes the sensitive ones a little uncomfortable (very detailed of X392 being beat up) but on the…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

That’s totally fine, no worries! Thank you so much for the help and explaining 🙂

I mean.. If I could add chapter by Chapter section to put my book on here, I would. But i’m not sure if that’ll count as spam even if I just keep it in one of these whatever they’re called. Posts. Or has anyone else done that? Like updated it as they go?

also… I love how grammatically correct these boxes all bc all of why i’m typing it’s like going
“Ahem? Hello, but you are terrible at grammar.” Like yes. Ik. Thank you. XD I can write well if it’s in a book. Kinda. But just typing like this I write like texting.

Stop personally attacking me Kingdom Pen xD

@godlyfantasy12 Yess my poor girl.

And yess. I do love Roger so much (especially in chapter 27 we show him being SUPER SWEERT and i’m dying of feelsss) our morally grey character that is the fan favorite, BUT Nathaniel aka NATE AKA CINNAMON ROLL BOI will always have a special place in my heart.

Oh yes. I got a message the other day of one of my…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 loll i’m not gonna say names, but it’s ok. I just think when I publish i’m going to send him a note and say “To the guy who said I could never publish: Thanks for the motivation. :)” bc yes, spite was a great inspirer to never give up.

But thank you!!

And actually I think awhile ago, like a lonnnggg while ago I sent in chapter 4…[Read more]

OH and our Villain >:) General Seznick

(This snippet of what will be done in a future chapter 0.O)

“Stop me?” My harsh laugh echoed through the warehouse, “Silly little girl, don’t you know? You won’t be fighting me. You’ll be fighting them.” 

My smirk grew as the kids, the other soldiers, she knew and grew up with surrounded her with…[Read more]

“I’ll find you, Grace.” I whispered through the tears. 

Was it a pledge or a plea? A desperation to be enough or a doubt that I ever could? Would I find her just to loose her again? 

No. I couldn’t. I won’t.

Two stone heads burned in the back of my mind, two names scrawled on top. 

No. I couldn’t lose her too. I won’t be the only one le…[Read more]

“Till death do us part.” 

Sickness. Dearth too soon. Closing with another promise. 

“I’ll keep her safe, I promise i’ll keep our baby safe.” 

Intruders. Cornered by soldiers. Gunshot killing my sunshine. 

“No, please not again.” 

Pain. Crushed by guilt. Anger coursing through my veins. 

“You’ll pay. You’ll pay for all that you’ve done.…[Read more]

Also, (I’ll reply to all yall in just a sec) here’s the graphic/aesthetic of each of the MC’s and a lil kinda about them snippet.

Who was I? Was I anyone before? All I had were foggy memories of white walls and pain, and some sinister feeling that I was missing something. Did I have a family before being in this camp? Was I somebody? Or am I…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Wait, November, WHAT? NOO! What does she want you to do?

What did you just decide to do?!