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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Christian Dystopian novel– easy read in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@e-k-seaver I’d love to read it and give feedback on it!! I haven’t read any dystopian in a while, so this will be fun!
(@gracie-j thanks for the tag!)
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Sara Ann {Spark} posted an update 5 years, 2 months ago
@daisy-torres ok so i love it’s easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud. where’d you get it!???!! i. love. it. <3 <3 <3 <3 do you know of any other quotes that are similar????
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Lin replied to the topic Christian Dystopian novel– easy read in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@e-k-seaver I honestly don’t have much or any experience with writing or reading Christian fiction, so I honestly can’t be of much help, besides giving you, like, y’know, a regular reader’s perspective. You have my email already, so if you want to send it to me, I’d be happy to give it a read.
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic What are the 1st three things your MC says? in the forum Characters 5 years, 2 months ago
@kathleenramm Those lines sound amazing XD
@nova21 Bahaha sure thing! Only, you maay have to jump into the future at least 90 years XD
@devastate-lasting Haha thanks! I’m sure she’d love to be yours as well!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic How do you continue a character arc in a series? in the forum Plotting 5 years, 2 months ago
@nova21 Yayy! Glad I could help!! And listen, if you eeever need a beta/whatever reader, I’d love to assist XD
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic Overcoming Writer's Burnout : in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
Girl, I just SOOO feel ya!!!! I literally just got out of a major writing slump that I’d been in for all of June. Like writing literally blegh for me too and everything!!!!
So I guess, every writer is going to be different. For some people pushing through is what helps them. This use to help me, but well, it didn’t help this last…[Read more]
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic What are the 1st three things your MC says? in the forum Characters 5 years, 2 months ago
Ohmygoodness @anatra23 your character’s three lines were AMAZING!!!!!! (And waaaaay more interesting than mine XD) I’m actually really interesting in your story and MC now!! 🙂
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic What are the 1st three things your MC says? in the forum Characters 5 years, 2 months ago
Oooo this is SUCH a fun idea!!!! I LOVE IT!!!! And I LOVE Dylan’s dialogue. The first one was just kinda funny without the story’s context. XD It was awesome!!!!!
So my MC is a sixteen-year-old girl named Layla. I just started this new story, so I don’t know a lot about her yet, but from what I can tell she’s stubborn, competitive, and…[Read more]
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Kathleen replied to the topic Christian Dystopian novel– easy read in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
I just got it! Thank you!
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Kathleen replied to the topic What are the 1st three things your MC says? in the forum Characters 5 years, 2 months ago
So fun! These are from the messy first draft of the story I’m writing with my siblings
“Geez, Ted, I thought you were a superhero.”
“We climb onto the roof and break into the skylight. You unplug the freezers and smash all the ice cream cones, and I’ll find the secret recipes and vault. Got it?”
“Did you bring the grappling hook and ha…
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Kathleen replied to the topic Christian Dystopian novel– easy read in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
Ah! Congratulations!!!
I’d love to read it and give some feedback! It’s been awhile since I’ve read a dystopian novel so I’m really looking forward to reading it!
My email kjoy2803@gmail.com
Again, CONGRATS!!!
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Lin replied to the topic What are the 1st three things your MC says? in the forum Characters 5 years, 2 months ago
@nova21 XD Plenty of adventures to choose from!
I love your lines as well! Dylan sounds like he’d be quite hard to work with.
@writerlexi1216 Felicity sounds like what you described her as. Nice job!
@daisy-torres I’d want to be Catherine’s friend!
@lewilliams I want to meet Horace, like, right now. He sounds so proper.
@elfwing She sounds…[Read more]
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Lin replied to the topic How do you continue a character arc in a series? in the forum Plotting 5 years, 2 months ago
@nova21 Ay, good luck! Glad I could be of use.
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic What are the 1st three things your MC says? in the forum Characters 5 years, 2 months ago
@nova21 Oo cool idea!! Yours are funny XD
My character is kinda bubbly and sarcastic/teasing, so Ladies, here’s Catherine XD:
“It’s the perfect gift for your girlfriend, don’t ya think?”
“How many children will I be the aunt of? Six? Seven?”
“Oh! What if you have all girls! Your home will be amazing. Make sure you invite me over a lot.”
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Overcoming Writer's Burnout : in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
@writerlexi1216 Aww sorry you’re burned out!!
So personally, I have a few hobbies that I like to keep up with. If I burn out on one, I focus on bettering another until I feel ready to work on the first one again. Just make sure you do something so your creative inkwell doesn’t run dry, catch my quill?
Sometimes if I burn out, I listen to…[Read more]
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Lin replied to the topic What are the 1st three things your MC says? in the forum Characters 5 years, 2 months ago
@nova21 Oo, fun! Hard time to find which MC though, haha…
This is for Nan Jinqi, who’s, um, what is he like… He’s quiet and dependable, I think. Quite observant. Hard-working. I don’t know that much about him yet.
1) “Run!”
2) “It was your stupid machine that crashed and burned, [action tag omitted], And who said I was here to stop you?”
3)…
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Lin replied to the topic Overcoming Writer's Burnout : in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
@writerlexi1216 Ah, yes, the first time I won NaNoWriMo I didn’t write another word for 4 months. Not worth it lol. But since then I’ve built up my writing muscles.
For me I just keep floundering around in water like I’m about to drown. I tell myself I’m gonna keep writing, but in reality it’s so painful I can only get out 100 words a day. But…[Read more]
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic What's the weirdest story you've ever written? in the forum Topic of the Week 5 years, 2 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 I’ve never seen the movie but my whole family loooves the old cartoons!
@devastate-lasting Looll XD I mean some of the most interesting stories were born from chaos tho XD
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Lin replied to the topic How do you continue a character arc in a series? in the forum Plotting 5 years, 2 months ago
@nova21 I like this idea! Unfortunately I never plot out my character arcs so I can’t help you with that. Best of luck, though. I believe one time someone told me that an overarching theme for a series + individual themes for each book is good, so I think that could work the same with arcs. Maybe for the next book focus on something more…[Read more]
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Lin replied to the topic Writers' Corner #1 in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
@lewilliams It’s been pretty good! Working on a lot of things right now, started a new web serial, watching some anime, getting ready for some big changes…
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@sparksaraabbott11 Thankss!!!! Sadly, I don’t T_T I made it up haha. Thank you though!!!
@daisy-torres your welcome. <3 i love it. have you not invented anymore like that?? SO lovely. <3 <3
@sparksaraabbott11 Aww thanks! Uuum I did one a while back (more writer-themed though) that says “Excuse me if I spill the ink of my mind onto the carpet of reality”, and there’s one in the bible that I LOVE that says “We live our days as a tale that is told”. If I think of any others, I’ll let you know!!
@daisy-torres those are so good! thanks for sharing. <3 and i'd def love more if you think of them!!
@sparksaraabbott11 Thankss!! Sure thing!