@lrose5
Active 3 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Wise Jester
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
It is funny.
Sort of strong self control, but we were reading other series as well, so…
Aww, good. I love Viktor.
And guess what? I made a mistake too. Even after going back and redescribing him, I failed to mention his interesting backstory of loss and adoption, and the fact that he has burn scars up his hands to his…[Read more]
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Lin replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@denali-christianson Pfft sorry probably shoulda tagged you earlier
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
As Viktor walked up to the two, his eyes were tempted to stare at the serpent, but something about this boy caught at him.
He was tall, tall as the Woodmen, and as dark too. As dark headed as Viktor himself. Surely he wasn’t Yartian.
“Sure. Everything’s good.” His accent was strange as well, not lilting at all. “Who are…[Read more]
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Lin replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago

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Lin replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@denali-christianson I still have all your text in my email from the post lol do you want it
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Lin replied to the topic I volunteer as tribute! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 4 months ago
@denali-christianson (hit send too soon to see newest post)
and now I have gathered another fan hehehehe it’s all coming together——
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Lin replied to the topic THE WORLDBUILDING THREAD in the forum Fantasy 4 years, 4 months ago
@denali-christianson I’m glad I’m a relatable person! 😀 Sometimes I think I’m just in the corner doing wack and setting things on fire while all the other writers have their lives together.
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Lin replied to the topic I volunteer as tribute! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 4 months ago
@denali-christianson Heh I haven’t had this much stimulation on the forum for ages. For years. I can tell we’re going to have a fun time! In a non-threatening way, of course. *added exclamation mark to sound less threatening*
Oof haha sometimes I get lazy over things but never enough to like, stop doing it. I’m usually overcommited and will stick…[Read more]
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Lin replied to the topic BOOK TRAILERS!!!! in the forum Film 4 years, 4 months ago
@denali-christianson Yes.
UhhhhhhhHHHHHHHH I know @e-k-seaver and @daisy-torres have made book trailers before. If I were you, and had zero budget and wanted to make live action, then I would use like a free stock video site like this one: https://mazwai.com/#/grid (I’ve seen one of my favorite artists make a lot of beautiful music videos using…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
I know, right? There is such a difference. It’s really funny now, though, because I’m like,” Wow, I thought that was an insult, but now I see it’s a compliment that is of all things good for story prompts.
Yeah, I have to be careful what and how much I read. My sister and I literally spread LoTR over a year because of all…[Read more]
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Lin replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@denali-christianson *yeets off to Story Embers forum to do some stalking*
*yeets back*
Yep.
Called it.
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Lin replied to the topic THE WORLDBUILDING THREAD in the forum Fantasy 4 years, 4 months ago
@denali-christianson I think I’ve given up on worldbuilding at this stage in life, for all my projects now it’s either like, “What generally fits the vibe of this story” if it’s something short or casual, or, “What would make sense in the story and help me achieve the goals of my plot/character arcs/themes” if I’m being serious and hardworking, or…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Thank you! November and Ara are fantastic too. Oh, November…. XD I love reading what you write of him.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Oh, I forgot to mention, the twins have an accent, but by the end of this thing I mostly gave up. It’s a pain to write in first draft. XD
Zlatan and Vulkasin
Vulkasin slammed himself against the door, again. This time he was rewarded with a bruised face.
“Getting anyvere?” Zlatan’s voice cut through the fog inside Vulkasin’s head.
“Neh. You…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic The Beloved Character Death Discussion Page….Woohoo in the forum Characters 4 years, 4 months ago
Yay! I’m glad it was somewhat helpful, infact, I think it helped me!
Yeah, that sounds awesome! If it’s what you think your story (or charrie) needs, then definitely go for it.
And I will admit, I love it when a character lives. I mean, yes, it’s extremely powerful when they don’t as well, but why else would I want to show…[Read more]
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R.M. Archer replied to the topic THE WORLDBUILDING THREAD in the forum Fantasy 4 years, 4 months ago
*pops out of the snow like a daisy*
*realizes that reference makes no sense since it was 80 degrees here today*
*proceeds anyway*
I’VE BEEN SUMMONED.
I pick 2-3 real-world languages to go with each culture I’m developing, pick the descriptors I want to use for the place I’m naming, put those descriptors into Google Translate for each…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Ok, I’m back, because I don’t think I described him accurately. Another try, shall we?
Viktor: ’54” but growing (eventually), dark brown hair that’s beginning to curl, but isn’t yet (all that part was right, it is cut in the Yartassite style which was described above). Olive toned skin, keen dark brown eyes. Tall straight nose that is almost…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Viktor popped another auleive into his mouth and adjusted his mantle to catch the rising breeze.
And shade the auleives. He hadn’t brought them up here, out of their nice cool brine, only to let them dry in the sun.
Spring is almost over, soon the grain will come in. Then we will…
But why think of that now, when the earth spread out below…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Ooooooooo! This is awesome!
So, hi! I am Koshka (or at least that’s who I am around here, bwahaha) and here are my characters; 17 year old twins Zlatan Vulkasin, who though wolves in my book will, for convenience, be human here. That are wearing swords, a shield strapped across the back, and an open-faced Rus style helmet. Zlatan will also be…[Read more]
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