@lrose5
Active 2 years, 7 months ago- Rank: Wise Jester
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Think Twice About Character Death! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 2 days ago
That’s fantastic. *arms arsenal*
Your examples make a lot of sense. If Aragorn had died, his character arc and the whole theme of restoration would just be swamped in a big dramatic Fading. As for Frodo, in the end of Two Towers we’re given a glimpse of what it would be like if he dies=d and Sam had to take the ring, but as the…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic God Stories in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 2 days ago
That’s amazing! It’s wonderful what He has done or us. As the old song goes, “When I think of the goodness of Jesus,/ and all he has done for me, my soul cries out,/ Hallelujah, Thank God for saving me.”
I love how many different analogies there are in scripture for God and his relationship with us.
One of my recent favorites…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 3 days ago
The great thing is, since it’s so cold, they can literally take him back to the home camp with them.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Anyone else doing Crazy Editing Week? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 3 days ago
I’m registered to join! CWW was so fun and helpful that I signed up for CEW as soon as I saw it was open. I don’t have a ton to edit, but I have a lot of projects that I keep putting off finishing because they sound terrible. XD So I’m looking forward to this.
Also, it was so much fun to “invade” CWW as KeePers. In the huge numbers of…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 3 days ago
*Dumps confetti over both of your heads*
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Aw, I love it! The colors are so cheerful and the lines are so clean… ♥️
Taking pictures of art is rough. It still looks great though!
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 6 days ago
Yes!
I’m hoping to actually finish a draft this summer. Just not sure which project…*glances nervously toward glowering characters*
*Whispers*Â I think they’re hanging up on me.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 6 days ago
Also, I signed up for Crazy Editing Week. It’s right after my school term ends, so I’m hoping to get some stuff done. XD
Is anyone else planning on doing it?
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 6 days ago
Yes!
I’m working over the summer, but it’s maintenance on a campground, so I expect to have an easier schedule than I now.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 6 days ago
That’s vicious. And brilliant.
… I have. O_O It was okay. XD Not worth risking Natalian citizenship.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 6 days ago
Dun dun duuuunnnn.
Nice! I really liked those last few chapters!
Notes…
Poor Julian. He’s a lonely little guy.
Night was falling fast and there was no shelter. They were hemmed in by high cliffs on either side, and the wind shrieked down the path.
This section made me think of Carahadras. Brrrrrrr.
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Hmm. They seemed to…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 6 days ago
It’s digital art, which is definitely beyond me at best, so you get a gold star for that. ⭐!!
And now I can imagine him a bit better! You did a really good job capturing his character. I like it. 🙂
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 6 days ago
Eh, he’s just 17. You can call him boy for another few years without it being weird. XD
Deductions…
He’s gentle and tender hearted. He has a strong faith in God and tries to share it with his friends, if he has any.
He loves nature and animal, especially birds. He likes to draw the world around him, and maybe has a special notebook…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 6 days ago
Ok, that’s just beautiful! The pictures and messages are most of them sad/dark, but it’s so aesthetic that I keep coming back to look at it. You did such a good job bringing the different pictures together.
Love them both! The character claims do fit them very well.
Their stories are just… Sniff. I really want more Leon…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks ago
That’s awesome! I can sympathize.
Some other question ideas:
Will Snoden and/or Hewson be in this next book?
When did he start writing stories?
What’s one writing habit to avoid?
Does he think his connection to the Zulu tribes inspire anything in Green Ember? If so, what?
Who was Wilfred’s first wife/family he lost?
Will there…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 1 day ago
@loopylin Speaking of wise women,
Mother: That guy… He looks like, like…
Us: Gandalf!
Mother: Yes!
Us: In a button down flannel shirt!
Mother: What is he doing at Brookshire’s?
(Really happened. We saw Gandalf walk out of a local grocery store dressed like a country bumkin. It was unnerving.)
Me*holding up cast*: You know, this is such…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 1 day ago
Idk. I’ve already had all my questions about GE answered.
Maybe what his first story idea was? Or what were some of the most impacted books for him growing up?
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 1 day ago
Those are great. Coworker conversations are the best and worst things to overhear. XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 1 day ago
Why do you ask? (To you, Whaley, not Master Smith)
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