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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 12 hours ago
Well, thoughtesss…
It’s a dark before dawn thing. Maybe playing with the idea that the Empire has long, dark winters.
Fabulous armor. I love it. I’m happy done of the soldiers were saved so we can root for some of those suits of armor…. But there’s probably more bad guys in armor than otherwise.
The government is going to…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 12 hours ago
Oof, yeah no. I plum don’t like Victor Hugo’s writing, so I’m with you on that.
I don’t particularly enjoy heaven scenes either, but when an author takes a moment to show that God is actually with us down here, like when Aaron knew Jesus was so close and when the Maker talks to Janner at the Fane of Fire and felt the love of the…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 12 hours ago
Not sure where you go that from the board, but interesting guess…………
Oh, it was a prediction that came from the general feel of the board, and the last book.
Oh, well thanks for straightening that out! I had considered it. 😂
*Bows* You’re welcome. Glad I could be of service.
Interesting. I would say a majority of my charact…
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Koshka replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 13 hours ago
1)There will be mob fights.
2)Nearly everyone we love will get hurt.
3)Leon and Jullian’s pasts will come back to haunt them.
4)There will not be a plane crash, or a nuclear war.
5)The journal will be continued.
6)Prepare for major fallout to begin from the Prince dying in the last book.
7)Someone is going to meet Jesus,…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 5 days, 13 hours ago
No, we don’t do infant baptism. We will baptize children who understand what baptism is ect. and want to be baptized (I was baptized at 6 years old for instance), but we don’t baptize infants. While a soul is the same size no matter the age, we believe baptism must be a choice just like the rest of salvation, a decision on the…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 week, 1 day ago
What a perfect box!! 😉 The drawing is really good though. I like the lighting.
I always love it when little details like cardboard texture or tenis shoes etc. work out. It makes the process suddenly much more fun.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 1 day ago
Oh fun!
We should be able to, if we are not at our grandparents’ house in the serviceless country.
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 1 day ago
Ugh, y’all. I was listening to an audiobook version of The Guardian by Dee Henderson, and the reader’s voice got stuck in my head. Now whenever I read anything–and I mean literally anything–I hear it in this low, slightly gravely, male voice. Even my thoughts are getting half drawled.
The book was good. The reader I wish I could live without.
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Koshka replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 week, 1 day ago
ALSO SHOOT! I ACCIDENTALLY SKIPPED Koshka’s REPLY!!!!!!!!! SORRY! I WILL GET TO IT AFTERWARD!
You’re fine. XD I’m obviously not excessively active on KP right now (Ellette and Whalekeeper are currently conducting my funeral, LOL).
KP’s also been giving me fits, so I’m giving you a heads up that I may be a while checking back h…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 2 days ago
OH NO!!!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 2 days ago
We think one might fit: Captain Fry. He’s stocky and grumpy, but eloquent when nobody expects it. And he’s suspicious of the Longtreaders at first, which could translate into Gimli’s aversion of elves. His undying loyalty to them once that’s overcome fits well too!
Unfortunately, everyone in my family has a different mental image of…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 2 days ago
@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon
Ooops……..
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*Starts playing taps for her own funeral*
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Koshka replied to the topic Is there any popular trope or writing style you don’t get the hype for? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 week, 2 days ago
Ugh. If any of y’all decide to write a “good twin/evil twin” trope (and I don’t care if it is well done or not at this pount) you will be getting a letter from me. I’ve been asked that stupid question a few too many times, as well as it’s frustrating cousin “who’s the mean/nice one?”. If one of y’all pick it up, prepare for Koshka to be severely…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Is there any popular trope or writing style you don’t get the hype for? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 week, 2 days ago
Can’t say I loved the Anne of the Island triangle, but I definitely liked it better than what I see in modern stuff.
Evangelistic dating is dating/becoming romantically attached to a lost person with the hope that the relationship will lead them to God. Obviously, not a good udea to go into a relationship like that. It’s not h…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy Religions in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 2 days ago
🙂
Yeah, that might help. And it might not. I personally haven’t gotten tags in months, but I often hop on when I have a free moment and
lurkpatrol around.It’s been a very chatty place recently. As evidenced by the fact that newer KeePers are bumbling about in the guise of Eccentric Mentors and Chosen Ones.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Scrivener Questions in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 2 days ago
Fabulous! That helps a lot. Thank you for imparting your wisdom. 🙂
I’ll probably look into getting it later this month.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 week, 2 days ago
Bwahaha! XD You did a great job capturing his personality in the aesthetic.
I saw the shofar/horn and satchel with scrolls and wondered if he served as a messenger, a fitting occupation for a wanderer. On a flip side, if the scrolls were scripture, I thought he might be connected to your world’s True Religion. Maybe friends with a…[Read more]
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R.M. Archer replied to the topic How do you world build? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 2 days ago
I love to discuss worldbuilding! How I approach the worldbuilding process depends on the world. I have three main worlds I revisit, so I have three main processes, which I laid out in a blog post a few years ago.
There are certain factors that overlap among all of my worlds:
- I always have some core framework in mind–whether that’s a timeline…
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R.M. Archer replied to the topic Scrivener Questions in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 2 days ago
I don’t know the answers to all of these questions simply because my experience doesn’t cover all of them, but I can say:
2. Yes. I actually keep my Scrivener files on an external drive so that I can easily switch between my desktop and laptop (both Windows computers), so I don’t need to move said files, but prior to that I did keep copies on…[Read more]
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