@lrose5
Active 3 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Wise Jester
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Ava Blue replied to the topic Roleplay, Anyone? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Dang you guys have really cool characters :0 I was planning on just doing Bronwen as always but I think I’ll introduce Ilwyn! (he fits better with the fantasy thing we have going on)

This took me too long and turned out kinda funny but oh well 😛
Also no one has to spell it Il’wyn; that’s just how I write it in his story because that’s how names… -
Ava Blue replied to the topic song lyrics critic and ideas for next verse in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 11 months ago
OOH! I’m loving the imagery, and I would LOOVE to hear it if you ever finish this or any other music!! The only thing I might change is this:
To push back the
Coldness of nightto this:
To push back
The cold of nightThis is just because of syllables, but because I obviously don’t know the tune, I could be wrong and this might fit. Oh, and I was…[Read more]
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Ava Blue replied to the topic Hullo! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 11 months ago
@folith-feolin ack I’m sorry! If it makes you feel better, I call everyone sis 😅 And I think your name is awesome! I have a naming system similar to that for one of my stories with an elf-like race.
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Koshka replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
I’ll try as soon as I finish my math homework. *Sigh*
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Understood! It sounds really good.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @godlyfantasy12
Aw, November.
And this… Wrote itself.
Reúven
Lily laughed at him, her whole face a window of light. He smiled back and winked before turning his attention to the father.
She was a darling child, although not as sweet as…. As his cousins.
He rested one hand in his belt under his mantle, taking on…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Aaaaaaaaahhhhh!
Nathan!!!
(Also, pretty great punishment, on the cruel side. It’s horrible.)
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Yes
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Koshka replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
That scene. Was. So. Good. Some Peet’s of it could have been far too graphic, but not with that beautiful twist. Ugh. That’s the type of books we need more of.
(Â You can completely ignore this paragraph, but I’m adding it in because I wish someone pointed it out to me when I first started writing. So, just to save you a bunch of…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Did I ever mention that I love coats? Especially overcoats and great coats.
So… I’m really enjoying Grimm’s clothing. A lot.
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Ava Blue replied to the topic Roleplay, Anyone? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
I know I posted my OCs in the Character Castle but I don’t know that I’ll ever get to that one XD
Mind if I join? 🙂
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Koshka replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 3 years, 11 months ago
That makes total sense, although perhaps an interesting system of genetics.
Wait…what incident?
WHAT DID YOU DO TO HER?!?
Of course, I understand that you didn’t necessarily do anything, but you are the author, so…
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
I’m thinking the twins have somewhat heightened senses, as I’m trying to make them more like in the books. However, they probably don’t even notice it.
The Twins
Zlatan rubbed a hand down the back of his neck till he could feel the bindings. Still in place and relatively tight. Good.
Then he…[Read more]
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Ava Blue replied to the topic Hullo! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 11 months ago
I feel you sis
ever responded to your own message in a zoom class?🥲
@theloonyone WOO PINK FLOYD 🕺🪩 My dad says Another Brick in the Wall is the ultimate homeschool anthem XD You have MAGNIFICENT taste in music, if I do say so myself. Just curious, do you listen to any grunge? I’ve always been a huge Nirvana fan and I just discovered Bush &#…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 3 years, 11 months ago
Of course! Do you jest? Please show us the darlings.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Btw, if any of y’all have read LotR, Annia happens to have the same personality as Pippin, although thankfully not the same percentages.
Cécile
She smiled and gave a small nod. “If you would like. We don’t know our way around here, but do you need help looking for your friends?”
The group s…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @koshka
By the way, I think Reúven is an early grower, so he’s near 6′. Viktor has been in the midst of a growth spurt since you last saw him, so he’s more like 5′ 7″ now.
ViktorÂ
The door had opened to reveal a familiar face. Two, in fact. Viktor’s eyes went wide, and he saw November’s jaw fall s…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
*Drops through window*
Did I hear my name?
Ooo, looks like I left some characters hanging.
*Ruefully pats Annia on the head*
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