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Lin replied to the topic Considering Writing A Short Story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 5 years, 4 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Aw, that was a really sweet story! Only a couple of things: In addition to what Abigail pointed out, I believe that the fourth paragraph ought to be split for every new speaker, so:
Her head jerks in my direction, her green eyes piercing through the shadows. “Give it to me!”
I wince, wishing she wouldn’t yell. It only makes thing…
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Lin replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 4 months ago
@issawriter7 (Of course you can like him! Shhh, but I’ve always been more villain-inclined XD) Yea, I might be able to get maybe 2 more done this week. 5/12 so far, might be done soon…
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Lin replied to the topic Writing for a couple of hours. in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 4 months ago
@issawriter7 Oo, I’m tempted! May or may not come!
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Lin replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 5 years, 4 months ago
@scripter-of-kingdoms Ah thank you! Take your time!
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic Writing for a couple of hours. in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 4 months ago
Well, writers, I’m gonna be writing for about an hour if anyone else is on and wants to join me!!!
@abigail-m @joy-caroline (Don’t know if you’re online right now, JC, but thought I’d just double check anyway!!!!)
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic Fanart (or, as my phone tried to correct it to, "Canary") in the forum Art 5 years, 4 months ago
Ooooh, that’s an EPIC drawing of @gracie-j characters!!!!!!! *heart eyes*
So, on this topic can you share fanart of things you’ve drawn from movies and published books?
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 4 months ago
Cool!! Well, I like him already!!!! (Can I like the villain? :D) Ooooh, does that mean you’re gonna have more graphics to show??!!! Eeeekkk that’d be EPIC!!!! Oooh, YEA!!! I’m sure it’d be soooo cool to see them all together!!!
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic Considering Writing A Short Story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 5 years, 4 months ago
OOooooh, this was E P I C!!!!!!! I was on the edge of my seat!!! I really love what you’re doing here!! The creativity is MIND-BLOWING!!!!! And the bond of the two sisters was just AH-MAY-ZHING!!!!!!!! Eeeekkk!!! The only critique I have is that at the beginning of the story it was hard to tell who was saying what. Maybe have more…[Read more]
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Lin replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 4 months ago
@issawriter7 Aw, thank you! One of my worst villains but also a really fun guy to write about! I’m looking to complete the set of 12 for my Zodiacs soon…then I can probably put all of their aesthetics next to each other to compare.
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 4 months ago
Aww, THANKS!!!! Also (I really need to check back here more often) I REALLY LOVE this other graphic you’ve showed!!!! It looks sooo epicly AH-MAY-ZHING!!!!!!!
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Lin replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 4 months ago
@gracie-j @mkfairygirl Ah thank you!
@issawriter7 Also that looks great!
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Lin replied to the topic Hi, I'm new 🙂 in the forum Start HERE 5 years, 4 months ago
@hallie-jean Ah, I see! That’s perfectly fine!
Oo, those stories all sound rlly interesting! Yeah, I get what you mean about motivation. It’s hard. You just gotta keep at it and take breaks.
Ah, I’m currently juggling several stories right now! Some of my favorite past stories include one about a boy who has to make a choice at the end of summer…[Read more]
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic Considering Writing A Short Story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 5 years, 4 months ago
Oooh, you should TOTALLY go for it!!! I’m on the newsletter too and saw the picture. I was gonna write a short story, but I don’t think I will anymore. Don’t wanna be any competition to you and all that stuff. XD Anyways, I’d LOVE to read it when you get it completed!!! *gets excited* I know it’s gonna be EPIC!!!!!!! <33
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Katherine replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 4 months ago
@joy-caroline You’re welcome! 🙂 Ooooh, a devotional on the book of Romans sounds so cool!!!!!!!! I really love that book too!!! Awesome! I can’t wait to hear how it all works out!!!!!
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Katherine replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 4 months ago
@imwritehere1920 Awww, thank you so much, Lily!!!!!!!!😊💗
No, worries. I didn’t see any duplicates. 🙂
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Katherine replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 4 months ago
Here is a collage of my WIP. Issabelle, @issawriter7 , made it for me.

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Katherine replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 4 months ago
@devastate-lasting I love that collage!!!!! 🙂 It looks amazing!!!!!!
@everyone How is everyone’s boxes coming along?
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Katherine replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 5 years, 4 months ago
@scripter-of-kingdoms I love your drawing of Nina and Zelda!!!!!!!! They look FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!
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Katherine replied to the topic Hi, I'm new 🙂 in the forum Start HERE 5 years, 4 months ago
@hallie-jean Hello, Hallie!!!!! 🙂 Welcome to Kingdom Pen!!!!!!! I’m pretty new here too. I love writing fantasy too!!! I’ve never finished a novel either, but I hope to complete the one I’m working on. One thing I’ve learned this past month is that I am more motivated to write when I am writing with someone else. If you’d like we can write…[Read more]
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic Where do you find motivation? in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 4 months ago
Girl, you can NEVER use too many smiley faces! 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀 Also *whispering* you should totally shout the news to random people as well. XD
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