@loopylin
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Arien started the topic First chapter of my book . . . in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Okay, I said I’d post something from my last book, A Dream Come True, so here is the pitch and the first chapter!
First, the pitch:
Elinor and her twin brother Aedan were supposed to be like children to the Dickinsons. Instead, the Dickinsons treat them more like slaves. When Aedan learns that the Dickinsons are planning to sell them as servants…
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Ava Blue replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 3 years, 9 months ago
@loopylin GWORL HE LOOKS MARVELOUSSS
I really like the colors you chose, and the eyes are so great! And @Freedomwriter76, I LUV your character design!
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Light replied to the topic Thanksgiving in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
First of all, thank you so much for creating this topic! It’s so good to see more people in this world thanking the Lord on thanksgiving.
I’m thankful for my family. My family has gone through some hardships this past year or two, and I’m so grateful for our Heavenly Father helping us get through.
I’m thankful for small acts of…[Read more] -
Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@theloonyone @loopylin @mineralizedwritings
So after several KP deletings and accidental refreshing the pages, I FINALLY typed this! Sorry it took so long😅🤦🏻♀️.
Oh okay! I like the name Everly better too😊. Whoa, a trap door?! Our poor charries😅😬.
Matthew
Me and Carter leaned, hands on our knees, panting.
I looked over at Carter. Smiled, “I t…[Read more]
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Erica replied to the topic Thanksgiving in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Yes, I’m encouraged so much by the hope God gives us just when we need it. I don’t know if you’ve read The City of Ember (I forget the author lol), but basically the people are trapped in an underground city and the lights are going out. There is a group of people referred to as the “Believers” who are always smiling and singing and…[Read more]
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Ava Blue replied to the topic Thanksgiving in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@starofthenorth First of all, I’m so glad to hear that you’re okay! I’ve never been to the hospital, that sounds scary.
Personally, I’m very thankful for @loopylin for keeping me alive through the school year 😅 She helped me actually finish a big fat boring paper (and I almost got it in on time lol) and she’s the best friend I could ever ask for…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6
Alright, my two weeks of incredible busyness are over! I can finally actually join this. Sorry its taken so long!
I’ll throw in my character Elissa with the sister squad even though she isn’t a sister. She has Eastern-Asian features and is most definitely an extrovert.
Milo
“Are you sure it…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@theloonyone @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6
Everly
“Hi! I’m Carmen!” Carmen says with a smile, peeking over Everly’s shoulder at the girl. “Hey, you match Everly here with your sling! You could be sling buddies! Or sling friends… injury besties? I’m gonna have to work on that one…”
“Oh yeah…haha.” Everly laughs nervously.
The l…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@theloonyone @lightoverdarkness6 @loopylin
Lol your right 🤣 I’ve called her the wrong name. This is the first time I’ve ever written her, so it’s not ingrained in my head yet. It’s Everly.
Kaine
Kaine walks through the grand entrance. His boots tap lightly against the marble floors, as he makes his way around the large center area. Looking up,…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Aw thank you, glad you like it! 😀
Also the perspective on that drawing is amazing 😍
Thanks!
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @theloonyone @loopylin
Is her name Evelyn or Everly? I think you’ve typed both😅.
Matthew
“Oh…I’m not s-sure.” I stuttered.
“Hmmm.” Kaine looked up at the castle. Laughed, “Intimidating isn’t it? I’m going. I need to find Everly.” And with that, he walked off.
I looked at Carter. “Are you ready?” He asked, eye brows raised.…[Read more] -
MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@theloonyone @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6
Ok Kp eats edits, not just posts now. Looks like I’ve gotta get it right the first time 😅
That was Everly speaking above.
Kaine
“Oh…I’m not s-sure.” Mathew stutters, frowning.
“Hmm.” Kaine looks up at the castle. “Intimidating isn’t it?” He laughs.
“I’m going. I need to find Everly.…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@theloonyone @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6
“Oh, hello.”
Everly turns in shock to see the girl speaking.
“Oh no, are you hurt?” She asks.
“Oh! Hi!” Everly looks up at her, noticing the brown haired girl behind her.
“I uh, yeah. I’m doing alright at the moment. Thanks!”
“I’m Everl–”
Everly stops at the sound of another voice.
“Help, HELP!…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
@felicity @folith-feolin @theloonyone @loopylin @whalekeeper @freedomwriter76 @anyone
Ok so I’m not entirely done with chapter two… but I’m too excited to wait 😂.
@whalekeeper and @folith-feolin you guys know a bit more than the rest of us about the new character here because I’ve roleplayed with him and your characters. Try not to spoil…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@theloonyone @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6
Ok so I’m going to have a description of Evelyn here, kinda sad I’m not drawing her like I usually would, but tbh I’m pretty bad at drawing girls, especially if I haven’t had time to figure out their expressions.
Evelyn is 5′ 5″, she has the same burgundy (we don’t question how that happened ok, it’s…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @theloonyone @loopylin
I forgot to do Lyla’s bio too 🤦🏻♀️😂.
Lyla is 13 years old, and Matthew’s twin sister. She is actually only 8 minutes older than Matthew😂. She has light brown hair with a touch of blonde. And she has blue eyes. She’s a lot feistier than Matt. In fact, she usually protects him from the common bulli…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@loopylin Great idea! Crosshair’s going to be all like “WHY DO THEY HAVE MY PICTURE IN THIS BUILDING???!!!” And Feather’s just going to try to calm him down, which might or might not work…..That’ll be hilarious. I’d like to see how the other boys take it too!
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Lol I totally forgot to add a description for Evelyn. 🤦♀️
I’ll do that after school today.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
This does sound like an interesting idea. Maybe the scenery in the picture changes too, so if someone is inside the background reflects that, like if they’re outside it would show that too, just not the actual place.
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@loopylin @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings
That is such a cool idea!! Let’s totally do that! And Loopy, you captured Matthew’s personality perfectly👍😊!
Matthew
After Kaine climbed over the wall, we found the stairs he had spoken of and met back up with him, Carter turned to me, his eyes sparkling with mischief.
“Hey, Matt. I’ll race you to t…[Read more] - Load More
