@loopylin
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Woah, I just had an idea to make things more interesting. Let’s have resident castle villains! I propose just one or two at the start. So like guards of the castle anyone can use to make drama. if anyone wants them to be characters, make them whatever!
Let’s try to give them at least a motive though, not just mean…[Read more]
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Esther started the topic The Christmas Grandma Disappeared (Working Title) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 8 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @theloonyone @arien @starofthenorth @felicity @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @anyone_please!!
Hey, everybody!!
So, I wrote a short story for my grandparents for Christmas. It’s supposed to be cheesy. I need all the feedback and critique I can get, please!!! A…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Ok so it’s hard to keep track… but I think Milo (and Cammie?) are with the dragon rn too. (that right @theloonyone ?) Oh and feather and crosshair are there too.
Trying to help us stay organized with who is where, also because we have split the groups to make them easier to manage, maybe only tag the people your…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Forgot to tag everybody!
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @lightoverdarkness6 @loopylin @theloonyone @keilah-h @aagh!!-i-feel-like-I’m-missing-someone
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Enid started the topic Okay, I need a MaIn ChArAcTeR name in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
Hey y’all! So, I’m fixing up my very first story idea, because my tween past self would love that ❤ The hero’s a young boy, thirteen to fourteen years old, with green eyes and white hair, mixed with these orange-gold feathers. His clothing color scheme is deep rose, purple and mustard (all the rich colors). Personality-wise, he is kind of…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 started the topic Holiday Novella! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@whalekeeper @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @lightoverdarkness6 @esther-c @starofthenorth @arien @mineralizedwritings @theloonyone @loopylin
HEYA!!! So….
How would y’all feel….if I decided to write a short novella or whatever about my charries during the holiday season in A’Grend?
I’m thinking it would be a book of short stories from diff…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@loopylin Oh man, Carmen coming over there is just gonna…well you’ll see 😂.
@mineralizedwritings @theloonyone @esther-c @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 @koshka @elishavet-pidyonMatthew
“Who are you?!” Lyla shouted.
“Quite a lot of fire for such a little girl,” the voice rumbled. “Who am I? The humans used to call me Aurivis, if that is what you mean…[Read more] -
GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@loopylin I do! In case any of my charries run into yours lol
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
ALSO…
@loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @theloonyone @keilah-h @esther-c
Umm could yall give a basic rundown of what ur Charries look like and such? XD I already kinda know Everton, Amidala, Tauren and Lesli, but the others….not so much XD
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @loopylin @keilah-h @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
yall…I really wanna get back into the castle…. But idk how because all of my charries are with Freedoms….and she’s gone rn….and….IDK WHAT TO DO SOB!!!
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
Thanks! Not sure how much I’ll change, I might wait until I’m done with the first draft and have a better feel for the direction.
I’ll probobly go with the afterthoughts or afterthoughts, it seems to be what people like the best.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Fine by me!
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @loopylin
Yeah, That sounds good! These six will be together! 😊 Yes, a very shaken Matthew 😂.
I’ll RP in the morning. I gotta got to bed. Talk to you in the morning!! 😊
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@esther-c @Lightoverdarkness6 @theloonyone @keilah-h @loopylin Sorry if I missed anyone!
Tauren and Lesli
“Children from other worlds. What kind of strange magic is this?”
Tauren glances upwards. A large reptilian eye peers in through the tall stained glass window to their left.
He breaths. Caught in a sliver of silence before the pan…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@esther-c @loopylin @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h
Matthew
“I’m Lesli.” Tauren’s…girl friend? said, reaching out her hand towards the Lyla.“I see we both have nervous little brother problems?”
Oh no!! Is-is- she going to make fun of me?
Of COURSE she will!! I told myself, who wouldn’t? You can barely say hi to someone new witho…[Read more]
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Felicity replied to the topic Character Name Meanings in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
That Johnny story sounds creepy…but fun too of course! 😀
I like yours too! Very mysterious and keltic ✨
Thanks! <3
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Nah, he’s fine. It’s an old, scarred up injury.
Oh, okay.
Awwww 🥰 How old is Matthew again? Hehe, I’m not sure what Carter would think of that 😅
Haha, yeah. Matthew is 13, almost 14. How old is Carmen? I could see Matthew telling Carter “…Um…I-I think your sister is r-really s-s-sweet…and pr-pretty..” And Carter’s kind of like…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Of course!! 😁
Thank you so much!!!
Yay!!! I totally will!!
Oh, thank you so much! I know she will appreciate it!!
Yes. Ev is veeeery outgoing! 🤣 And impulsive… and I could go on… and it may end up being an understatement. Lol 🤣
I love my boy. 😁
Lolol!! haha, Yeah! It’s hard not to 😂!
Whoa!!He sounds sca…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Name Meanings in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
hehe… poor johnny… 😏🤣
Johnny is from a story @loopylin and I started writing like a year ago-ish about a river monster. Johnny is the first victim…
(It’s a bit dark)
We started saying poor Johnny and eventually, our cousins picked it up too. 😂 I’m not sure if they know what it’s from, though
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Name Meanings in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
Yeah! He was cool.
Oh don’t mind if I ask…
Who is Johnny and what happened to him?
(Y’know? Your signature? XD)
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