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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
@felicity @folith-feolin @theloonyone @loopylin @whalekeeper @freedomwriter76 @anyone
Ok so I’m not entirely done with chapter two… but I’m too excited to wait 😂.
@whalekeeper and @folith-feolin you guys know a bit more than the rest of us about the new character here because I’ve roleplayed with him and your characters. Try not to spoil…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@theloonyone @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6
Ok so I’m going to have a description of Evelyn here, kinda sad I’m not drawing her like I usually would, but tbh I’m pretty bad at drawing girls, especially if I haven’t had time to figure out their expressions.
Evelyn is 5′ 5″, she has the same burgundy (we don’t question how that happened ok, it’s…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @theloonyone @loopylin
I forgot to do Lyla’s bio too 🤦🏻♀️😂.
Lyla is 13 years old, and Matthew’s twin sister. She is actually only 8 minutes older than Matthew😂. She has light brown hair with a touch of blonde. And she has blue eyes. She’s a lot feistier than Matt. In fact, she usually protects him from the common bulli…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@loopylin Great idea! Crosshair’s going to be all like “WHY DO THEY HAVE MY PICTURE IN THIS BUILDING???!!!” And Feather’s just going to try to calm him down, which might or might not work…..That’ll be hilarious. I’d like to see how the other boys take it too!
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Lol I totally forgot to add a description for Evelyn. 🤦♀️
I’ll do that after school today.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
This does sound like an interesting idea. Maybe the scenery in the picture changes too, so if someone is inside the background reflects that, like if they’re outside it would show that too, just not the actual place.
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@loopylin @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings
That is such a cool idea!! Let’s totally do that! And Loopy, you captured Matthew’s personality perfectly👍😊!
Matthew
After Kaine climbed over the wall, we found the stairs he had spoken of and met back up with him, Carter turned to me, his eyes sparkling with mischief.
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Felicity replied to the topic Introducing a Fellow Writer in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 9 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @koshka @folith-feolin @loopylin
Thanks everybody for your warm welcomes! I’m excited about future discussions, debates 🙂 WIP swapping, learning, writing and everything else you all do on here!
And a big thanks to Kathleen Ramm and the others who made this forum…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings posted an update 3 years, 9 months ago
I read back through the draft I showed yall, lol I left my note of Tauren’s mom as “Insert name” 🤣🤣😂 Oops I didn’t mean to leave that.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@loopylin OH MY GOSH I LOVE THIS IDEA!!
@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @everyone-on-here
we need to think of more ideas like this!!! Things relating to our charries like this and just the environment and AGH I LOVE THIS! Like I room that has ur greatest fear/fears…(I have a similar thing in one of my series book)
and y…[Read more]
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Felicity replied to the topic Introducing a Fellow Writer in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 9 months ago
Feel free to interrupt our snake chase! 🙂 Hi! Nice to meet you! I’ve never tried writing sci-fi before. Sounds exotic and exciting!
I’m planning to make the end of my WIP Overcome be in July 2022. Because I don’t know how the war will end in real life, I can’t really use that in my story unless I want to wait…for however long it…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@loopylin @theloonyone @lightoverdarkness6
Kaine
Kaine drops down on the other side of the rock wall, landing in some brush. He watches as the others climb down the stairs and reach the ground.
“Hey, Matt. I’ll race you to the castle.”
Kaine looks on as the two boys tear off through the tall grass and shrubs in a burst of energy.
Kinda looks…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @theloonyone @loopylin Sorry if i forgot somebody!
Kaine
Kaine’s boots scrape down the rough wall as he tries to climb up higher. Pulling on a small crimp in the wall, he heaves himself up a foot higher, bringing his body in close to the hold. His hand holds tight to the edge on the large rock, but he feels his fingers slowly…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Kad
“Dante…I think we all need an explanation.” said the largest human, pulling the one-eyed red creature toward him.
“I’m going home. Or, I was going home. I was going to go back without having to worry about those bounty hunters chasing me and making my life a living nightmare!” Dante eyed Ellie.
“You’re bounty hu…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@loopylin @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings
Matthew
”Oh yeah?” Kaine said, looking at me, brows furrowed. I knew he was wondering why I stuttered so much. Quite frankly, I wasn’t sure! I always got nervous when I was around new people, if I’m around a pretty girl, or if I’m afraid something happened to Lyla. And when I get scared, I stutter.…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@loopylin I’m waiting for @freedomwriter76 to RP in our group, then I’ll go.
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GodlyFantasy12 posted a new activity comment 3 years, 9 months ago
@loopylin
Cool!!
So I originally thought Paxton had a bit of autism as well, but it turns out it’s actually just severe Child PTSD. Because PTSD can actually Resemble Autism, (I found an article on this I believe I put the link in character castle somewhere)
So yea! But in extreme cases of an onslaught of bad memories or emotions, Paxton will h…[Read more]-
@godlyfantasy12 You mentioning that about Paxton in the castle is actually what made me start thinking about it! The PTSD and autism overlap is really interesting. I really enjoy learning about psychology and things like that.
@freedomwriter76 Oh! A deaf and mute boy sounds really hard but fun to write😃. I remember reading a fantasy book that…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Kaine
“Oh yeah?” Kaine says, noticing Mathews stuttering.
Is he just nervous? Or does talking about his sister make him nervous?
Kaine looks up at the imposing wall. Small rock portions jut out of the side, and it’s streaked coloration shows it’s age.
Have to find Evelyn.
Kaine puts his hand on the wall, feeling for a good spot to grip.…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@loopylin @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings
YES!! That’s a great idea!! Maybe once we get the hang of one group, we can add the sisters. Maybe they’re already in the castle!! Oh yeah, I’ll try to put something other than ‘said’ for Simon. That would annoy me too😂.
Matthew
“Oh, twin! Nice.” Kaine said.
“Umm.” Kaine paused, looking down at t…[Read more]
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Lol, yep! It’s totally fine, girl! It happens XD.