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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
Thanks! Not sure how much I’ll change, I might wait until I’m done with the first draft and have a better feel for the direction.
I’ll probobly go with the afterthoughts or afterthoughts, it seems to be what people like the best.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Fine by me!
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @loopylin
Yeah, That sounds good! These six will be together! 😊 Yes, a very shaken Matthew 😂.
I’ll RP in the morning. I gotta got to bed. Talk to you in the morning!! 😊
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@esther-c @Lightoverdarkness6 @theloonyone @keilah-h @loopylin Sorry if I missed anyone!
Tauren and Lesli
“Children from other worlds. What kind of strange magic is this?”
Tauren glances upwards. A large reptilian eye peers in through the tall stained glass window to their left.
He breaths. Caught in a sliver of silence before the pan…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@esther-c @loopylin @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h
Matthew
“I’m Lesli.” Tauren’s…girl friend? said, reaching out her hand towards the Lyla.“I see we both have nervous little brother problems?”
Oh no!! Is-is- she going to make fun of me?
Of COURSE she will!! I told myself, who wouldn’t? You can barely say hi to someone new witho…[Read more]
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Felicity replied to the topic Character Name Meanings in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
That Johnny story sounds creepy…but fun too of course! 😀
I like yours too! Very mysterious and keltic ✨
Thanks! <3
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Nah, he’s fine. It’s an old, scarred up injury.
Oh, okay.
Awwww 🥰 How old is Matthew again? Hehe, I’m not sure what Carter would think of that 😅
Haha, yeah. Matthew is 13, almost 14. How old is Carmen? I could see Matthew telling Carter “…Um…I-I think your sister is r-really s-s-sweet…and pr-pretty..” And Carter’s kind of like…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Of course!! 😁
Thank you so much!!!
Yay!!! I totally will!!
Oh, thank you so much! I know she will appreciate it!!
Yes. Ev is veeeery outgoing! 🤣 And impulsive… and I could go on… and it may end up being an understatement. Lol 🤣
I love my boy. 😁
Lolol!! haha, Yeah! It’s hard not to 😂!
Whoa!!He sounds sca…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Name Meanings in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
hehe… poor johnny… 😏🤣
Johnny is from a story @loopylin and I started writing like a year ago-ish about a river monster. Johnny is the first victim…
(It’s a bit dark)
We started saying poor Johnny and eventually, our cousins picked it up too. 😂 I’m not sure if they know what it’s from, though
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Name Meanings in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
Yeah! He was cool.
Oh don’t mind if I ask…
Who is Johnny and what happened to him?
(Y’know? Your signature? XD)
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Gotcha
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Yay!!! I totally will!!
@theloonyone @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h
Amidala
Ami instinctively grabbed Ev’s arm and took a few steps back. She stared at the large green eye peeking in through the window.
“Ev… what is that?”
Everton
Ev shakily stood up, and Ami grabbed his arm. She pulled him back a few feet. “Ev… wh…[Read more]
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Felicity replied to the topic Russo-Ukrainian War Novel. Please Critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @folith-feolin @koshka @lightoverdarkness6 @arien @starofthenorth @godlyfantasy12 @madelyn @wilder-w @sarafini @elishavet-pidyon @kathleen-ramm @esther-c @theloonyone
Here’s chapter three of my WIP Overcome if anyone’s interested!
Any feedback you might have is very welcome! 😀
Glossary of…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
@theloonyone @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity
@whalekeeper @arien @starofthenorth @pen_for_christ_205
Ok! May I make announcement?
Thank yall for following my story, I appreciate it a lot enjoy sharing it with you all! I seem to be having a major plot upheaval, and may be re-writing the whole thing. I’ll still use some scenes here and…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@loopylin A dragon? Cool! Now I wanna move Kad over, but due to timeline/AU restrictions, I can’t have him with Crosshair and Feather. But once you introduce him, I can put another dragon from a different story in!
@esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings
Crosshair
“Why does he keep staring at us?” Amidala ask…[Read more]
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Light started the topic Forum For Pictures of our Charries!! in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
Hey, everyone!! I’ve seen pics of charries scattered around the forum, but I haven’t found a topic for just pictures of characters…so I made this!! Feel free to post anything else about your charries too!
Tags!! @godlyfantasy12 @felicity @arien @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @theloonyone @folith-feolin @whalekeeper @queen_of_alva…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Name Meanings in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
@esther-c @theloonyone @loopylin @felicity @mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12 @starofthenorth @arien
Awww, I love everyone’s charries name meanings!! So, for Matthew and Lyla I did look up a bunch of names and their meanings, and I chose the two that seemed most fitting and I liked the most.
Matthew means: Gift of God.
Lyla means: Island B…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Name Meanings in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
Thanks for the fun topic!
Oh, I really like the name Ruben. And of course, Everton. He’s my favorite from your WIP.
Oh! I like the name Dante.
I like Ellisa’s name, and it’s meaning too! 😀
Have I met Grant yet? 🤔
Oh I like the name Aedan! And little fiery one 😂 that’s funny.
I like…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Can’t remember who asked, yeah Tauren does have glasses.
Okay!! Oh, it was me who asked. I love glasses on a boy. My little brother I love that drawing of him you posted earlier 😊!
Aww, poor Tauren!! My charries won’t judge you buddy!! They’re not what you would call exactly tall either 😂😅!
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