@loopylin
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Lost in a haunted mansion AU Roleplay in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Btw, I think the way we’re doing it, the ghosts can appear to only their target without anyone else seeing them, but they still could appear to other people if they wanted to. In this case, it probably doesn’t matter, though.
Dalton’s ghost will probably only appear to him, at least for now. If it appears to other people, I’ll…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Lost in a haunted mansion AU Roleplay in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
I think Alpha needs to meet his ghost…
Alpha Grath
His knives were out with a flash of metal, one in each hand. The edges glowed red. Alpha stared down at the newcomer, his eyes loosing their smiling luster and instead taking on flames.
“Who are you, and what are you doing here?” Before the drop-in could reply, Alpha heard…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Lost in a haunted mansion AU Roleplay in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Dalton
Dalton glanced over his shoulder as he ran to see if he was still being pursued. He couldn’t see anything.
Suddenly, something smashed through the roof in front of him, then through the floor. [Assuming Twitch wasn’t on the highest floor of the building?]
Dalton lurched to a halt and scrambled backwards. His hand gro…[Read more]
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Lydibug replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Yay!!! GO BANANAS
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Lydibug replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Yes! The bananas! Whaley turned to the dark side tho. (She’s on the grapes team… 🙄😋)
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Ruth replied to the topic Lost in a haunted mansion AU Roleplay in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Alpha Grath
Alpha eyed Twitch through his black visor. Suddenly, he dangled himself off the edge of the beam again, drew one of his knives, drove it into the wood, and hung down by one hand.
“Nah, stairs are boring.” He tapped the side of his helmet, causing it to fold back to reveal his face. He met her brown eyes, and smiled back…[Read more]
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Lydibug replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@loopylin I might not reply to your rp in a bit cause CWW is starting (the bananas are gonna win!!!)
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Ruth replied to the topic Lost in a haunted mansion AU Roleplay in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Alpha Grath
“The police? What’s that? And no, I didn’t kidnap you.” Alpha grunted as he managed to stand on the beam. He closed the previous knife, and slid it into it’s holster before bringing his foot up into arms reach and sliding a knife out of his boot. He grasped the blade between his thumb and pointer finger, scanning the…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Lost in a haunted mansion AU Roleplay in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Twitch, BEWARE of falling projectiles coming through the roof!
Alpha Grath
Crashing through roofs was not ideal. Breaking through floors and catching yourself on a beam was not ideal either, plus it hurt.
“Achlys, where am I?”
“I can’t find you, Alpha.”
Joy, off the radar. Alpha pulled himself up and turned to sit on the beam.…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Lost in a haunted mansion AU Roleplay in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Ah, that’s still really cool though! He sounds awesome!
Teo can if you want, though I’m not sure how he’ll react quite yet lol.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper @loopylin @smiley @esther-c @hybridlore @acancello @keilah-h @kyronthearcanin
@felicity (Are you still alive? XD I’m kidding, I know life probably just got busy. I’d love to chat sometime though if you have time.)
Ignore the tag if you like!
I’m writing out of order, anyone want to read a…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Lost in a haunted mansion AU Roleplay in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Lost in a haunted mansion AU Roleplay in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Lost in a haunted mansion AU Roleplay in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Okay, great! It’s such an interesting concept, I wanted to see how it worked and if it could help with some character building!
So, my character’s name is Teo. He’s interesting because for the longest time, every time he had a strong emotion he died and came back in another world (that power came from a mysterious…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Lost in a haunted mansion AU Roleplay in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Lost in a haunted mansion AU Roleplay in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
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Enid replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@scoutfinch180 (I love your name btw) @rae @loopylin
Thank for the suggestions 😛 I do still like Ransom and I will use it somehow, whether or not it’s for this character. I’ll let all these names simmer some more. Right now he will go by Ben, until something sticks.
Also completely random, but I really like him as a character now XD I named him…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@loopylin @rae @otherpeopleI’mstrugglingtonamebecauseIdontwanttobotherpeople (Tags are so useful, eh? XD)
Character name needed!
Okay, so I have a cute side character. He is from Project Chrysanthemum/Baztet, and he is basically Babs and Marcel’s little brother. He is super scrawny and weak, has fluffy white hair with orange speckles und…[Read more]
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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 8 months ago
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I just got a great idea, but I’m not sure if it is so great.
For once, I am going to mandate you to reply in some form, I have…[Read more] - Load More

I think that is awesome! I don’t have any theological problems with that. I tend to avoid doing robots and stuff, because I don’t believe that such a creation would have a soul, and I would usually rather avoid writing about those topics. I haven’t thought about how that would extend to a human created in a lab. There’s nothing biological about a…[Read more]
*either not dither
I don’t like to play with sentient and rational robots, honestly those creep me out. The idea of Alpha being originally a a robot made out of flesh came from me just thinking about him. It was really weird, I was talking as Alpha to his best friend Terry and it just spilled out. I was making it up as I went, but it sounded like it was a set piece…[Read more]
That makes sense to me. I think we’re pretty much on the same page.
I haven’t thought about it in depth, but from first glance, I don’t have a problem with it either. I guess it would depend also on how he was created. Did they take human DNA to create him? If that’s the case, then I think he would have a soul just like any other person, because the rest of us are created with human DNA, even though the process of…[Read more]
He was made from mixed DNA, to give him the traits Grathmere wanted. I believe most likely, he was made the weird 3D printer way at first, and developed from there.
He was actually interestingly enough, not made to have any moral compass. He was supposed to be a heartless assassin that did what Grathmere wished. He’d have limited free will, but…[Read more]
I think that’s a really good idea. I don’t find any theological issues with it. Er, I don’t really have any other comments ATM 😅
@rae
I like the idea! I think it makes sense that he would be without breath at first, and I think that God could definitely give him a soul if He chose
Ooh, ok. So I see where your doubts are coming from. Here’s my opinion…
I believe that as soon as a baby is conceived in the womb, he (referring to either gender in this case) is a human being with a soul that is loved by God. Obviously he cannot physically breathe yet because he’s only a few cells. But when he is born, God is ultimately the O…[Read more]
@rae
I really like this idea!!!
I think this is a fun idea. I don’t think there’s any theological problems. Is this your fantasy, or something else? If the first, then I wouldn’t think theological and scientific problems should be your primary concern, because what you say goes. Even if your more into hard worldbuilding, you can build up a distinct theological system that is…[Read more]
@thearcaneaxiom Yeah, this is in my sci-fi/fantasy Galaxy. Alpha is one of my main charries.
I don’t think this is too weird an idea for a sci-fi universe. It’s basically like God put literal, actual life in a body which was built, not born. Like a machine built out of flesh and bone, it was working, but it wasn’t alive quite yet. I think the way he explains it is a little strange, but that’s an explanation and can be modified a bit.
My only issue is that if his heart was going but not his breathing, he would die pretty quickly, so maybe he was effectively “dead” with neither organ working, and when they tried to “jump-start” him, his heart started but not his lungs, and then when they were confusedly trying to figure it out he started breathing.
That was a weird explanation, sorry….
It makes sense…in fact that was the way I pictured it in my mind, just Alpha sometimes says things weirdly, and leaves out parts.
I believe the term for during but still coming back to life by revival is called “clinically dead”. Not sure if Alpha falls under this or not, though…
Ok, good, it made sense…lol