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@ellette-giselle

Oki-doki, I will get to it

@loopylin

Hm. I did not pick very good names for this, did I?

Well some of my ship names are Qugo and Marcid so yours isn’t the weirdest 😆

@grcr

ACK you witch!! *Shakespearean howl* Leave me alone to wAllOw in my own grAvE!!! 😤🥺

*cries in a corner*

@koshka @freed_and_redeemed

Thank you for your k…[Read more]

@keilah-h @ellette-giselle

The ones with feathery wings like birds are the mean ones, and the ones with scaly wings are my family and are friendly. Kinda opposite to what I’ve found humans usually think, I know.

lol there’s only one good feather-winged kid, which means we need one bad scaly-winged kid.

@freed_and_redeemed

Yes, that’s so true. I go through phases of writing improvement, and this roleplay helped so much it’s crazy. I can say the same for many projects, but this one is so consistent and easy to return to. I love it because I and my sister traditionally read updates before bed. Thx for creating it ;]

@calyhuge

Hugo

The dorm door burst open as a boy barreled in. Behind him, girl bearing a shield surveyed the area.

Hugo quickly shoved the puppy into his sock drawer. He stood up and gave a sheepish grin. “Good, uh… afternoon! It’s getting late already, isn’t it?”

“This is Seb’s room, correct?” the girl asked.

“He’s not here.”

She jerked…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Ah makes sense!

@keilah-h

wonderful!! Any thoughts?

@keilah-h

Rory

Rory tucked away the info about the winged kids for later. He glanced at Hunter. The kid was young, but Rory guessed he could become an ally if a fight broke out. Rory shook his head. Thee I go again! Will I ever be able to view the world through the eyes of a teen instead of a soldier in a war zone?

Hunter offered to show him…[Read more]

@Grcr

congrats!! How many wins is this?!?!
it was well earned.

@ellette-giselle

Hunter

“So, the winged kids are nice… except then some of them are really mean. That totally isn’t confusing. Not only do you tell me I need to keep an eye out for winged students, but I have to be able to tell them apart?” Rory asked. “This place is certainly out of my league. So, who are these fellas with the artist brother…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings yeah that’s just cause of my weird cartoon-realistic combo artstyle haha, but thanks!

you and @grcr have a very similar style! I can see why you’d pick that one.

@ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @keilah-h @grcr

Thank you guys! It was a lot of fun getting to see all the submissions! 🥰

Don’t worry about it @rae !

Ok! Here’s my comments on each one. I’ll post my drawing below.

Linus-smallprint

You got his facial features pretty well, and I really like how the hat has a bit of droop to it lol. It looks…[Read more]

@theshadow so….we have traded places…..

now you’re telling me to read your story that you’re afraid is a dumpster fire! (Don’t worry, I think yours is great.)

I would go with what @linus-smallprint says about the new paragraphs whenever a character is talking. Look at my fanfic–the google doc separates the paragraphs out a lot, so I’ll…[Read more]

@theducktator

Crosshair

“Well, maybe we could find a way out while we go on a quest. Like, a secret passage full of deadly traps under a moat! I doubt you could get out even if you tried. It’s a well known fact that you can’t escape a fantasy world until the world is saved, and your arc is complete. We’re only at the inciting incident. Unless…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle amazing!

@ellette-giselle I’m still reading!

@keilah-h

it was my own design. This are the characters from the movie. I have seen a few similar posters. I’m glad you like it!!

@linus-smallprint

im so glad you’re still interested and willing to help me! Once I’m finished with it on here I’ll be passing it on to my editor. So this is SUPER helpful.

hmmm, I think I did foreshadow but maybe not clearly enough. Thats easy to fix.

Aaron has grown!! I’m glad you’re picking up on it! I was worried it was too subtle, b…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed I like how you took the basic idea of the What If episode and made it your own thing!

@theshadow lol yep

oh and thanks. Which loaf scene exactly? Cause there are a couple haha. What point are you at?

I tried to make it as entertaining as I could. Some of it’s derived from official media the developers of the actual game have put out over the years. The plot of the latter two-thirds or so are from a comic series they made (I don’t…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle haha I think my dad showed me the dog one a while back. poor doggy lol

and ha, that’s a perfect shot of the horse leaping.