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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 9 hours ago
(tagging some other peoples too) @ellette-giselle @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @anyone-else
Okay….
I have come to a decision lol
I’m keeping the prologue the same, but I’m tweaking a few things with the beginning.
Here’s the new first chapter (it opens when Sef is sixteen years old) Don’t worry, I’m going to edit it and…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 9 hours ago
How long should I give you before deciding that you must have forgotten to post your RP?
I don’t want to nag, but if you think you posted and are waiting on me, and I’m waiting on you, no one will ever post. Ya know?
lolol.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 9 hours ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
NEXT SECTION
The next morning, the adults were up bright and early, surprisingly before the children. “Amelia, why don’t you join us girls in the kitchen,” Sabina said when Amelia and Joseph appeared. “We can work on the big breakfast for the children.”
“Oh…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 9 hours ago
Vendailia is beyond.It’s not a bad idea to run the boarder, but it’s a bad idea to do it emotionally unstable and with part of a death wish, if you know what i mean.
Several soldiers already escaped by doing this.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 9 hours ago
True.
Okay, that makes more sense. But why would William want to do that? What’s out there beside Ardenta? I get he’s coming from an emotionally unstable place, but it seems sort of random.
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whaley replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 17 hours ago
@princesachronicle22
You’re in luck; I, a bystander, just finished reading through this entire roleplay for no reason. Goodness, this one’s pretty funny.The ducks took one look at each other and went to opposite sides of the pavilion
I just about died when I read this.
I think basically everyone (at least almost everyone) found out about the…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 21 hours ago
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Sara replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 21 hours ago
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Sara replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 21 hours ago
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 22 hours ago
@theshadow @keilah-h @theducktator @rae @kyronthearcanin
that would be cool! I’ve been so dead to KP like for half a year, I’ve been so busy 😂😭. And I’m kinda really lost as to whats happened in this RP, would any of y’all mind recapping me?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days ago
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TheShadow replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 1 hour ago
@keilah-h @rae @theducktator @kyronthearcanin @princesachronicle22
Hey all, do you still want to do this? If not, that’s completely fine.
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TheShadow replied to the topic Writers' Corner #1 in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 1 hour ago
What’s this topic for?
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TheShadow replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 4 days, 1 hour ago
Oh boy. Ngl, this does not sound like me lol…
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TheShadow replied to the topic Free will in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 4 days, 1 hour ago
Well if you ask me it’s not so much that hell is a punishment for sin as much as the state you choose to exist in.
Well, people who choose to live apart from God on earth are kind of living a personal hell, right?
Well if you ask me it’s not so much that hell is a punishment for sin as much as the state you choose to exist in. If…
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TheShadow replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 1 hour ago
@hybridlore @highscribeofaetherium
Ok, thanks.
Shattered… fragments.
Thoughts… broken.
What? Why?
Memories whirl.
Voices, who?
Flashes, noise, tears.
Why?
Louder, louder! So many, too many. Never… end.
Could it… end?
Fragments. Pieces. Shattered. Tiny, big, scathing.
Guilt. Much guilt.
Never end. Only noise.
Too many. Sleep.…
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TheShadow replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 1 hour ago
EEK! A week?! Sorry gang, I have not been good with this.
I’m improvising with the snake, lol.’
XD same.
Rowen
Before Rowen knew what was happening, he was suddenly lifted into the air then placed several feet away from the fight. “What the-”
And then Hugo ran towards the snake, sword in hand, shouting, “Friend pow…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Free will in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 4 days, 1 hour ago
When they see plainly that there is nothing else, and they are sufficiently brought low to the depths of humility, they can be changed by Him, and they begin to be the most grateful for life, instead of those who can indulge in worldly pleasures without being forced to grow.
Exactly, which is a huge problem in first world countries…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Do you celebrate Christmas? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 4 days, 1 hour ago
So, what are you concluding now?
Good question lol. As of late. I’ve become very overly obsessive over whether something is right or wrong, and this isn’t the only subject I’ve been mulling over lately. I’m still not sure, because I don’t want to end up doing what’s wrong, but I also can’t confirm that Christmas is 100% bad either.
What…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 4 days, 2 hours ago
lol
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