Loopy

Okay, guys…I’m just going to start tagging everyone I can think of lol

Would anyone be interested in reading through/critiquing/giving suggestions on my WIP?

I love writing, but it’s hard to write when I’m not sure if people would even be interested in reading it or if it’s actually trash lollll

Not that I care what people think, but it…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Thanks!!!

Aubrielle’s her older sister.

@rae

Amazing scene! And I agree with Whaley. Not too repetitive, but maybe substitute a few of those “Fathers” with something like, “The man” or something. Not too much of that either, but just enough to brake up the monotony of “Father”

@savannah_grace2009

Ooh I love desert settings! Too bad Liv doesn’t feel the same way – and too bad she is so exhausted, for that matter. Is this sister older or younger than her?

@rae

I don’t think it’s too repetitive, except for this bit at the beginning:

Baron knocked and entered his Father’s quarters. He knelt. “You sent for me, Fat…

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@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @keilah-h

So…I just wrote this scene and i was wondering if it’s a little weird that I call the guy ‘Father’ all the time instead of giving him a real name. He isn’t a priest and he isn’t even Baron’s biological father. The reason I don’t give him a real name is that Baron doesn’t know what his real name is, he…[Read more]

@theshadow

Lol, we’re talking about charries as if they’re children or siblings now

How do you deal with him? He seems a little tough.

We make fun of each other. There have been times I’m in a conversation with other people and we’re talking about annoying things, and I’ll go like “You hear that Silvanis? That sounds just like you!”. He usually…[Read more]

@keilah-h

by the way you did finish the fic right?

Oh dear, I forgot to tell you with CWW and going back to school, sorry!

I really really liked the ending! It was so sweet. My only criticism would be I kinda didn’t understand fully what was going on before that point, Otherwise, it was great!

Aw :/ so sad *cries*

@savannah_grace2009 nope, sorry.

@keilah-h

Do you have a pinterest account? If you’re logged in it should work.

@savannah_grace2009 huh, your link isn’t working.

@keilah-h @anyone-else

If you want to know what things in my book look like, like people, places, etc, here’s a link to my pinterest! I have a lot of boards with pictures that describe several characters and races in my book!

https://pin.it/3TYRfqUSE

@keilah-h

Yeah, he’s pretty cool!!!!!!!! <3 I love Xandro

@savannah_grace2009 ooooh that looks so pretty!

@keilah-h

Here’s a good pic of what he’d look like:

@freed_and_redeemed

it’s kinda interesting that you bring this up, bc it’s at least hinted at in the MCU that Steve was raised Christian

 

“There’s only one God, ma’am, and I’m pretty sure he doesn’t dress like that.”

 

And in the comics, it was canon that Steve was raised Catholic by his Irish mother, and I also found it really interest…

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“By either rain or sweat, you’re gonna get wet.” –Singaporean saying that also applies to Florida (where I come from)

“While on a cruise or vacation, don’t be that guy and you’ll have a great time”–another saying

@koshka ooh interesting!! What story is this?

@savannah_grace2009

Xandro can’t manipulate water on his own, and he does have power, but his powers lie “dormant” unless an Aquino combines their powers with his. It basically just gives the Aquino more capacity to manipulate moisture, if that makes sense!

But without an Aquino, he’s just a normal horse except he has the same “color scheme” a…

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