Loopy

@ellette-giselle

Aww. That was sweet.

Jim seemed nicer to Jonathan before these chapters, but I guess Jonathan was hidden and Jim didn’t have to worry about the others watching.

Did the gang have something to do with Jonathan’s parents dying?

@loopylin

Is Enid your friend?

“Yeah, she’s… yeah.”

No, I’ve never been on one of those. We have cars and, like, normal buses.

“Huh. At first I was going to say that sounds tedious, but I can’t talk like that when sky trams are so undependable.”

What do the buildings in your city look like?

“Imagine every building had three or four stories at l…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

woah! That was crazy!

Thanks for sharing!!!

I hesitated for like ten minutes before pushing the submit button. I don’t know how some of you guys do this regularly. :’-)

@loopylin @rae @koshka @ellette-giselle @theducktator

Yaay, I actually have a self-contained snippet to share. This is pre-teen Barnes, in case you’re not sure who she is.

The typewriter clicked to a stop, its keys fluttering up and down like the legs of an overturned insect. Lucille opened her eyes. The sun glared through her eyelashes, turning…

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@loopylin

and now I’m really sad but also weirdly motivated to get some writing done.

Be sad then!! *Shakes you to make you write more* I need a Lois x Fel scene as soon as you can deliver.

@hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @theducktator     @grcr   @whalekeeper

NEXT CHAPTERS!!!

@rae Praying for you! 🙏🏻🩷

@esther-c

Okay that makes sense…I’ll keep reading and waiting for more and I’ll let you know if I come up with anything else!

I will be sure to remember that on the next cliffhanger.

@ellette-giselle

True, true. 😆

@hybridlore

Yes. I did.

Well, you could….. I’d just have to write it……

@ellette-giselle

Oh wow. So you wrote those two this morning?

Darn. This means I can’t ask for bonus chapters. 😢 XD

@hybridlore

I do two chapters each day and then post them. I may jump the gun today so that I have some fallback though.

@ellette-giselle

Wow. That’s a lot of drafts.

How far through this draft are you? Finished?

@hybridlore

This is draft number…… 7. I think.

I wrote this when I was 13 and have done rewrites almost every year since. This time I scrapped the draft and started over completely since I know the story inside and out. I feel like I can breathe again and it’s going much better.

@ellette-giselle

You didn’t like it before? Lol.

So how much of this have you written?

It’ll be interesting to see what happens with Viper.

He’s a tough guy who takes in a little kid. Plus, he doesn’t seem to want to be there any more than Jonathan does.

@hybridlore

Do you!!? I like him too. 😁

I’m so glad you like it. I’m actually also starting to like it as well.

Any thoughts about the new situation Jonathan is in? Also, out of curiosity, what makes you like Jim? (I like him, but i know his whole arc. I’m interested to see what you like. )

@linus-smallprint

Thank you so much for this! It was really helpful!

btw, Tintin is THE BEST. 😁

@ellette-giselle

I like Jim more and more…

Good chapters! I really like this book.