Loopy

Hey!

So last year I wrote for 12 hours on July 1st, and I kinda want to do it again if I can. It turns out perfect cuz it’s actually supposed to rain where I am tomorrow so I have an excuse to stay indoors.

I am going to add editing and writing this time cuz The Baron Chronicles needs some more editing love (haven’t done much since…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

I’ve been on KP like a year and a half by now, and I have never seen anyone be that way to another writer here. Most the time, I actually feel like people don’t criticize my writing enough on here.  So yeah, maybe people are like that other places, but I’ve never seen it here. Maybe some jokes, but never anything serious.

@the_lost-journal

WHY IS IT SO RELATABLE!!!!!!

I feel like that last one is definitely how people come up to me after reading some of my stuff…..

@keilah-h

Sounds good.

@hybridlore

Eh…. it was a wild week. One I’m glad to have over. 😅

Thanks, glad you like them! Yes, Amber did do a good job with him, but she’s a peacemaker type.

You think I’m gonna kill someone! *is offended* XD

@the_lost-journal Have at it then!!

@ellette-giselle

All good things, hopefully?

I liked these two chapters. Amber handled Jonathan very well, and I’m excited to see him have the conversation with Michael. I also want to know how their mission goes.

Why do I feel like this is the part where you might kill someone off?

@ellette-giselle It’s okay!! I’m late to reading them anyway.

@theshadow

Hey! I’m doing pretty good, how are you?

No worries, I know the end of the school year is chaotic. 😂 I’ll add you to the new doc!

Thanks! Glad you like him. 😅 He’s one of my favorites too.

@theshadow thanks lol

they’re hilarious together ngl. also they probably have joint ownership of like 5 brain cells lol

Hey guys, I’ve been thinking. How do you encourage a reader to like a character who is already dead? And with minimal flashbacks? And and without being boringly sad? I have a few ideas, but this has been a challenge so far and I was wondering what everyone else thinks.

@hybridlore

Hey!! What’s up, how have you been? I’m really sorry that I wasn’t responding for a while, but I’m just about done with the first part, is it okay if I read and give you some thoughts about the second one? It’s really good so far, Everett is definitely my favorite (always love a musical man).

@theshadow

I’ll try to get to it!

@keilah-h @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @the_lost-journal @liberty @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint

It has been a very long time since I last posted on this topic (3 months apparently). First, I’d like to thank everyone who read my draft; it was a huge help, and helped me re-evaluate my entire story.

Second, I re-evaluated my story and have chang…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Lol, that’s hilarious! Love the little interaction with Huntress, it’s perfect.

@hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @theducktator     @grcr   @whalekeeper  @power

NEW CHAPTERS

Sorry I’m a bit late today! I had a lot going on.

@rae

Yep. Poor Sniper.

ikr, poor guy.

i love how it’s just like:

the character: is a literal assassin and would know like 10 ways to kill me if I got within a mile of him. Plus my augmentations to him give him two or three more of those ways to kill me.

me: I feel so bad for you, your life is so tragic. I would give you a hug if I weren’t con…[Read more]

@rae

Gotcha.

@hybridlore

Haha, Evan is great.

I find it odd that the others blend. I would get that with Jason and Brian because they aren’t around as much, but I’m surprised Ron and Michael do.

Interesting.

@keilah-h

lol you know me well don’t ya?

i hope so. XD. i try to pay to attention to people’s charries…even when I forget the world lore…

I’m assuming you saw that image in the school roleplay lol.

Yep. Poor Sniper.

Also, thinking of Sniper getting shot, it hit me yesterday but Medic is definitely a parody of how real army medics will do<…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Okay. My limit is 4 hours of constant activity before I get tired. Then I need naps and food to get me back to normal again. If I’m not doing too much, I can make it through the day fine, but my stamina is terrible…again.

Otherwise, all’s good.

thx.