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@rae @grcr Any updates?

@ellette-giselle

Good chapters. Nice touch of action towards the end! And that was a good cliffhanger. 😬

@koshka     @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon    @theducktator    @grcr     @whalekeeper     @power    @hybridlore     @liberty

TWO MORE AND THATS ALL FOR TODAY

@linus-smallprint

That would be interesting, though as of this point they are not in active rebellion as much as restoration. 😉

Thanks! I’ll look forward to it.

Oh yes, I’m looking forward to hearing your thoughts on them.

Really, I don’t mind if you don’t want to talk about it, I just thought you wanted to.

@linus-smallprint

I understand what you’re saying about personal conviction. I believe God is still with you anyway.

I’m trying to respectfully discuss the conviction itself, since you have argued the rebellion in Ellette’s book is a problem. You challenged the morality. You already put morality on the table. Thus, I was under the assum…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I understand where you are coming from. I don’t agree with it. but I think that puts us in the same boat. (I’m pretty sure you at least understand where I’m coming from, even if you don’t agree with it.)

I’m totally fine with you not reading the second book btw, so this conversation is totally not about me trying to convince to…[Read more]

@koshka     @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon    @theducktator    @grcr     @whalekeeper     @power    @hybridlore     @liberty

ANOTHER NEW CHAPTER

Shall post two more today if I can.

@ellette-giselle

Is a POV blind spot bad?

Nah, not really. Depends on how you handle it. Females are 50% of the population and many of them must be firstborns. We know very little about them. It’s a world building thing, and you’ve had to choose where to spend your effort, so it’s not surprising you haven’t included them.

If you wanted to, all…[Read more]

nope. Still no pictures.

@grcr

GOODNESS!

@hybridlore   @keilah-h

That is true, and I have mentioned females a few times, but 618 in not really in contact with them. It will come out a little more now that he works with the Agents, though they are mostly military focused.

@whalekeeper

Is a POV blind spot bad?

But anyhow, I’m glad everyone likes to see the soldier side of t…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

*cries in corner with you*

@theshadow

Yeah, it’s pretty cool!

And if you don’t enjoy rock, that’s fine. Sometimes certain genres bothers a person and they don’t know why. It’s just a fact of their life. Many country songs rub me off the wrong way, and I don’t know why. 🤷‍♀️

You might have to explain what that thing is though XD.

Synesthesia? That’s where a person has de…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

You have synesthesia? That’s so cool! Thanks for your response, I think that’s great that the song leaves that kind of impact on you.

You might have to explain what that thing is though XD.

@theducktator

Thanks for your thoughts. Your most likely right about the self righteous point from which the authors were writing. They did…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

*Cries in a corner*

I do like how in this book, we’re getting to see the perspective of one of the soldiers.

True.

It is also true, I forgot. We only have one female character so far. Other than what I call “extras.” And she isn’t from the city, so we have a POV blind spot, so to speak.

@ellette-giselle

Thanks for letting me know lol.

@elishavet-pidyon

Ah, another classical music lover! (The lack of classical fans is alarming). I love classical, and somehow enjoy rock as well XD. Thank you, Paul’s passage is very applicable here.

You mentioning rock and rebellion reminded me of one boy who, before converting, loved heavy m…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Thank you for the concern, it’s so kind of you! Your right on the money, I have noticed I’ve become a bit obsessive/overly scrupulous about things recently, so as you mentioned I will look into OCD.

@linus-smallprint

Huh, that’s interesting about the instruments. I’m not still completely sure why I felt uncomfortable listeni…[Read more]