Loopy

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @keilah-h @linus-smallprint (Hey, do you still want to be tagged on this since I know you’re taking a break soon?) @theducktator

New chapters are out!

@ellette-giselle

I think the first chapter works pretty well! There was a bit of space in between Jonathan’s time in school and him talking to his brother that sort of felt like filler, but I’m not really sure what else you could put there so it might be fine for a first chapter to introduce the characters and the world.

One note: I was very…[Read more]

@liberty

Wow, I really liked reading this! Are you planning to use the characters in a novel?

The POVs seemed pretty different, I think. Obviously, the longer we spend with the characters, the more we’ll get to know them and see their differences, but I got the impression that Zahn was the peacemaker, Kyler likes to tease and instigate things,…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Yeah, that’s understandable. I’m sorry 😢 🤗 But hopefully you have a great time at camp! I’ll continue to pray for you guys!

I’ve been doing pretty good! Just started math again so I can finish my class by next year. So… yeah. 😅

@theducktator Praying!

@koshka Who are they? Astronauts? Fighter pilots?

Either way the boards look awesome!

@savannah_grace2009

One of my youngest friends has cancer. ♥️ It sucks. Don’t let it push people out even if it becomes a normal in your life.

@ellette-giselle
Sounds good to me! Once I catch up with Linus’ work, I can help here, although I may stop at some point to make time for summer activities.
What kind of editing do you want? Super detailed? (Since you said this is several drafts in.) Just a quick read through?

@ellette-giselle awww that’s a shame! I echo Linus here, no one was hurt right?

@koshka

Perfect!

@linus-smallprint

Yeah. Dented up my pretty blue car. 😢

@linus-smallprint

wait…. did this hot my inbox really late….. or was I on there before it was released?! 😱

I literally just got done commenting and editing chapter 32

@linus-smallprint

No kidding.

Plus someone crashed me yesterday going into town. Add that to the list. 🙄

@linus-smallprint

I’m so sorry, I have been swamped. I kept trying, but i just haven’t got the time right now.

@koshka

Oh yes, an email thread would be best.

Oh, did you see that I have a chapter of the first book out?

I greatly needs your opinion!!

@koshka

*Screams and dances in a circle*

OH MY WORD!!!!!!!!

I so want Leo to meet Cass now. Those two would get along so well.

and all the world would suffer for it.

@linus-smallprint

Sounds good.

@linus-smallprint

haha… yeah. Uh, it went through some more rewrites. Again.

Okay then, sounds good.

Shall i still tag you, or do you want to just let me know when you’re back on?

@hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @linus-smallprint   @theducktator   @grcr

( @kyronthearcanin      @whalekeeper        @jonas      @power  ) Y’all haven’t responded, so I’ll tag you for now, but let me know if you don’t want me to anymore.

Okay all, chapter 1 is out. I’m using Microsoft Word. I think if…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Thanks for asking!!!!

It’s been a rollercoaster. I have some good days, some bad days, some days where I just want to shut everyone out and not talk to anyone XD

And then I have some days that start out good and then end with me sobbing in my bathroom trying to get ready for bed 😭

The Devil also has been trying to attack me with…[Read more]

@koshka

will do!

Thanks! I know!!!!! Poor kiddos!!