Loopy

Sef and Lilitu’s frog wedding was so funny lol

@savannah_grace2009

I actually love that Liv is younger but thought to herself that Aubrielle needs the resources more. It’s only a little contrast (to the ‘save the resources for the youngest’ trope) but does a lot to show her personality.

@rae

Yep, yw! And don’t be afraid to keep tagging me for stuff.

@savannah_grace2009 I’m liking it so far!!
I would say things are going a little fast, but that’s not you, it’s how fast I can read.
I love your character and place names, they’re really cool. And each new main character you introduce is really interesting!

I have a story idea which is kinda similar to yours in terms of genre and…[Read more]

@rae

Yep, yw! And don’t be afraid to keep tagging me for stuff.

@esther-c

Don’t get your hopes up girl! Ellette kills approximately every character who ever existed 🤣🤣

@esther-c

Do you really want to know?

@esther-c

I’m glad some of what I said was helpful! I’m excited to see what you end up doing in your story.

@esther-c

😂😂🤣

@savannah_grace2009

Lol! Ok, awesome, I love it!! 😂

@esther-c

Okay, end of February it is!!!! XDXD

@savannah_grace2009

It doesn’t have to be anything special, tbh. If you just said, “Hey can you get it fully read by the end of February” or something like that, then that would work great. Otherwise, I might just forget or keep putting it off. 😳😂

@ellette-giselle

Wolfy dies, doesn’t he…??? 🫣 Or does he not?? I must knowwwww 😩

@koshka

Ah, okay, I get what you’re saying. I’m definitely going to be considering that getting into some major plot points coming up in my book. 😉 Thanks!

@theducktator (excuse my tardy reply🫣🤭)

Aww, that’s a bummer. 🙁 Yeah, the time off can be nice though. 😉 Still praying for y’all!! <33

@ellette-giselle

Thanks so much for taking the time to reply! I really appreciate your point of view on this. I can’t say I agree with everything 100%, but I definitely understand and support your viewpoint. It gave me a lot to think about!

In fact, piggybacking off of your conversation with Whaley, I can totally understand your way of t…[Read more]

@liberty @jonas @highscribeofatherium @linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle

Thanks everyone!!!

You guys can use the link on my profile to read it, and then post any comments here, if that works?

@esther-c

What’s a reasonable deadline? There’s 19 chapters as of now, with more to come lol

It depends on how fast you can read XDXD

@theducktator

NO. MATURE. RELATIONSHIPS. BETWEEN. CHILDREN. I have read about 2 books ever that had elementry/middle school relationships well written. I don’t care if in real life 12 year olds date. I don’t want to read about it.

TELL ME ABOUT IT. It’s insane how often you’ll find those in books and it’s really just ridiculous. 🥱…[Read more]

@esther-c

Ahhh that’s so funny lol

Livia

“Thanks,” she exhaled hard. “Sorry, I didn’t mean to dump all this on you. But yeah, that’s why I’ve been acting weird.”

@savannah_grace2009 (Almost tagged you @Livia XD)

Lukas

Lukas chewed on his lips for a moment, resting his elbows on the bridge railing. The river gurgled by, providing fresh water for the fountain in the middle of the courtyard. He tried to get the words flowing as fast as this river, but nothing was coming to him. Whenever Lukas was…[Read more]

@koshka ooooh very cool!!

@savannah_grace2009

If you gave me a deadline, I’d be totally down for it! Sometimes I’m busy with school and whatnot, but if I have a deadline, I’ll be sure to get to it and give you some feedback!