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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 6 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 6 months ago
good work!!
wait… your hand cramps from writing? Mine never did that. I thought it was a myth.
but I also thought unions burning peoples eyes was a myth until my friend and I were cooking stir fry and she started tearing up really bad while cutting them. 🤣
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 6 months ago
oh my goodness. She’s a horrible mother. 😂
(and I feel bad for laughing)
I was actually thinking about the magic. It seems to be thought based. Like yours. At first it seems emotion based, but then when I rewatched “let it go” to see if I was right, it seems more thought based. Whatever it is, we aren’t told how she’s c…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Hybrid pointed that out to me too. For this chapter specifically, I wanted it to feel pretty fast paced, specifically when she got to the party. Do you think that worked?
Ah, okay then that makes sense. It did work pretty well, the chapter felt fast paced. Not in a bad way though, it introduced the characters and world efficiently.
Let…
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TheShadow replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
Lucky, I try to draw stuff fast then end up erasing it aggressively lol.
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
I had a feeling I needed to hear this. Thank you for the advice, I really do need to listen to it. I’m a bit of a perfectionist so it’s going to be hard to post stuff as it is, but thank you again.
Linus is 💯 correct. Plus, the more you pause the more you lose your flow. For me, I turn off autocorrect and gra…
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Esther posted an update 1 year, 6 months ago
@hybridlore @ellette-giselle @savannah_grace2009
Hey ladies! I’m planning to do a few writing sprints this afternoon and was wondering if y’all wanted to join me. (For anyone else reading this, I only tagged those three because I know they’re familiar with sprinting, but if you want to join, go right ahead!!)
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Enid replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 6 months ago
I’m sorry, there are just too many uses for Disney Princess quotes. I want to watch Tangled again, just to remember all of Flynn Rider’s lines. My quote arsenal is running low.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 6 months ago
Oh goodness.
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Thank you!! 😊
Thanks!
Ummm… sort of??? I mean, I based it loosely off of my relationship with my older brother—we tend to get along for the most part and rarely, if ever, actually fight. Of course we do goof off, but half of what we goof off about would look so weird in a book. XDD
I know what you mean though, and I d…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 6 months ago
He’s not a believer but seems to be asking the right questions recently
That’s a good sign. :-]
Is he older or younger than you?
He is a year younger than me, but you wouldn’t know it by looking at us. He is heavier (due to exercise and being a ravenous teenage boy), and he’s in a wheelchair, so it’s hard to guess who is taller.
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Okay, I’m going to catch up with the rest of the chapters, but chapters 5-6 were good.
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TheShadow replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
This was good, nice job. The only thing I would recommend though is using a bit more body language.
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Enid replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 6 months ago
My brother loses his steam over many inconsequential details.
Me: 🎵 It’s funny how some distance makes everything seem smaaaaaalll 🎵
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 6 months ago
oh goodness.
there is so much wrong with that song.
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Enid replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 6 months ago
have you ever seen Frozen?
✨ Let it gooOooOoOOoooOo ✨ *Throws back my hair dramatically* I sing that song whenever my siblings are unnecessarily argumentative.
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Enid replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 6 months ago
Do you ever have that problem?
Oh yeah, all the time. I’d say to write it down anyway, because there is always some reason why you had the idea in the first place.
Every idea has a nugget of interest behind it, and if you feel some appeal despite knowing it won’t work, write it down. Then think about why it appealed to you…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 6 months ago
@hybridlore thank you!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 6 months ago
I’ll be praying for him as well!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 6 months ago
heyo! Just wanted to come back here and ask for some prayer for my uncle. He’s been having some really bad internal issues and is in a lot of pain.
He’s not a believer but seems to be asking the right questions recently, so prayer for both his physical condition and his spiritual search would be appreciated!
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@esther-c
I’d love to but I’m out of town and don’t have access to my computer right now! 😭
Aw man, no worries though!! <33
Oops, forgot to break at :00! Stopping now
Going again!
I… didn’t really follow my schedule, lol. But it’s okay!!! Because I got a lot done. Clocking out for the afternoon. 😎✌️
Hey! Sorry I missed that. I’d love to another time, but I’m also out of town and don’t have my laptop, plus I’m with family so I can’t really sneak away right now.I’m glad it went well! <3
No worries! I totally understand! <3
Ooh, sprints! If you do any more of these, I’d love to be tagged. 🙂
Oh my word… 🤦🏻♀️ You just reminded me that like over half of us on here know what sprints are because of CWW. My badddd 😂
🤣🤣🤣I think there’s even a topic for it somewhere. XD
Yeah I think you’re right 🤣 We’ll have to dig that up and revive it!!!
Indeed. XD