Loopy

@ellette-giselle

Jim giving Jonathan shoes. It was a sweet ending.

Ohh, right. But other people, maybe.

@hybridlore

what was sweet?

No, the gang was not involved in that one. They were killed because they hid Jonathan.

@ellette-giselle

:] Mayhaps I will post more when desire returns.

@ellette-giselle

Aww. That was sweet.

Jim seemed nicer to Jonathan before these chapters, but I guess Jonathan was hidden and Jim didn’t have to worry about the others watching.

Did the gang have something to do with Jonathan’s parents dying?

@loopylin

Is Enid your friend?

“Yeah, she’s… yeah.”

No, I’ve never been on one of those. We have cars and, like, normal buses.

“Huh. At first I was going to say that sounds tedious, but I can’t talk like that when sky trams are so undependable.”

What do the buildings in your city look like?

“Imagine every building had three or four stories at l…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

woah! That was crazy!

Thanks for sharing!!!

I hesitated for like ten minutes before pushing the submit button. I don’t know how some of you guys do this regularly. :’-)

@loopylin @rae @koshka @ellette-giselle @theducktator

Yaay, I actually have a self-contained snippet to share. This is pre-teen Barnes, in case you’re not sure who she is.

The typewriter clicked to a stop, its keys fluttering up and down like the legs of an overturned insect. Lucille opened her eyes. The sun glared through her eyelashes, turning…

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@loopylin

and now I’m really sad but also weirdly motivated to get some writing done.

Be sad then!! *Shakes you to make you write more* I need a Lois x Fel scene as soon as you can deliver.

@hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @theducktator     @grcr   @whalekeeper

NEXT CHAPTERS!!!

@rae Praying for you! 🙏🏻🩷

@esther-c

Okay that makes sense…I’ll keep reading and waiting for more and I’ll let you know if I come up with anything else!

I will be sure to remember that on the next cliffhanger.

@ellette-giselle

True, true. 😆

@hybridlore

Yes. I did.

Well, you could….. I’d just have to write it……

@ellette-giselle

Oh wow. So you wrote those two this morning?

Darn. This means I can’t ask for bonus chapters. 😢 XD

@hybridlore

I do two chapters each day and then post them. I may jump the gun today so that I have some fallback though.

@ellette-giselle

Wow. That’s a lot of drafts.

How far through this draft are you? Finished?

@hybridlore

This is draft number…… 7. I think.

I wrote this when I was 13 and have done rewrites almost every year since. This time I scrapped the draft and started over completely since I know the story inside and out. I feel like I can breathe again and it’s going much better.

@ellette-giselle

You didn’t like it before? Lol.

So how much of this have you written?

It’ll be interesting to see what happens with Viper.

He’s a tough guy who takes in a little kid. Plus, he doesn’t seem to want to be there any more than Jonathan does.