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@mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @theloonyone

Simon

“I’ll meet you guys on the other side.”

Kaine dropped out of sight on the other side of the wall.

The rest of the group followed his instructions, found the stairs, and got to the other side. Once they had met up again with Kaine, Carter turned to Matthew, a spark of mischief in his e…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 I finished Reuben! I have very little experience drawing guys so it was really helpful practice. I hope you like him!

@freedomwriter76  hehe yeah, Dante needs to learn to quit being so selfish and Steve is the perfect person to teach him that lesson @keilah-h

Dante

“Dante…” Steve grabbed Dante’s shirt, pulling him out of the seat and towards him, “I think we all need an explanation.”

Dante grabbed the arm that held his shirt with both hands and looked up at…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76   Ooo this is a cool topic! I’m pretty sure every writer on the planet does this (wether they realize it or not). It’s part of what makes stories interesting. The readers can see parts of themselves or parts of people they know in the characters they read about.

I definitely do this because a lot of my characters have adhd like…[Read more]

@theloonyone @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6

Carter

“Sorry, guys, for ditching you all. I just ah,” The curly haired woman said, addressing everyone. “I don’t know what is going on either and I needed to do something. Maybe if we can get to that castle, thing, we can get some answers.”

“Oh, you’re all good.” Simon answered. (I am…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy That’s what I said. But that doesn’t stop us from putting weird stuff like an entire forest inside the castle.😏   Just kidding, that’d be a lil too crazy. (I do like my cave system idea from earlier tho…)

@mineralizedwritings
I love this and I could totally see it as a graphic novel! I definitely want to read more💕   I also really appreciate that you’re acknowledging the harm that divorce causes. That isn’t addressed very much in modern media.

@mineralizedwritings

Yay! I’m glad you like the idea! My characters could probably take care of Evelyn if it doesn’t take a large amount of medical knowledge. They’d certainly be willing to.

I think they already have an obstacle because the castle is pretty much a never ending maze and there are a few villains roaming around that we could bump…[Read more]

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That’s funny that they all each have a missing sister 😆. Would you guys want to maybe add all the sisters in a separate group later? Then our characters would all have a goal (finding their sibling) to complete before we take them out of the castle. We don’t have to, though.

@lightoverdarkness6   That’s not very long, actually. You should see some of the things freedom and godlyfantasy have written 😆. The longer ones are the most fun to read anyway.   @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings

Simon

“Should we follow them? We’ll need a place to sleep and shelter if it rains. And maybe we can find something to eat in that ca…[Read more]

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lol ok bye Cammie 👋

@keilah-h @freedomwriter76

Dante

Chaos erupted between the two groups. Ellie ran to her sister. Kad shot into the air. Kursk, Bucky, and Steve jumped into action, fighting off the two armored men. Reuben had disappeared.

Dante used the opportunity to slip into the ship without being noticed. He walked swiftly across the main room and climbed…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @theloonyone

Simon

As the two boys ran closer, Simon saw that there were four people: three boys, one girl.

“Hello!” Carter called out once they were close enough to be heard.

Three of the new people who had had their backs to them spun around. Simon and Carter ran the last few yards and stopped in fro…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6 Yeah! I like the idea of it being in the early 1900’s. Lots of opportunities for cool outfits and hairstyles 😊

@lightoverdarkness6 That’s a really cool idea! I like it a lot so far. Is it set somewhat in the past or in a different country? I’m asking because orphanages are pretty rare in modern day America and most of the time the foster care system is used instead.

@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h

Ellie

The sound of someone approaching startled Ellie and she spun around, gun in hand.

“NO! Don’t hit her again!”

A man held up his hands in defense. “Wait! I’m not going to hurt you…I’m going to help you…please…let me help you help her…”

The man was now kneeling so that they were eye to eye. Ellie studied his fac…[Read more]