Loopy

@esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h

this isn’t really from any particular person’s pov, so…

“Who are you!?” Lyla shouted.

The creature shifted its position outside the window, revealing pale gold scales. It huffed, momentarily fogging up the glass.

“Quite a lot of fire for such a little girl,” the…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Can’t wait to see your revised version! I think I like the title Afterthoughts the best

@lightoverdarkness6

Carmen’s 14/15 ish. She doesn’t really know

@felicity

I love your new profile pic!!!!

Thanks! I like yours too! Very mysterious and keltic ✨

@lightoverdarkness6

He’s hurt? Does he need medical care?

Nah, he’s fine. It’s an old, scarred up injury.

Oh, and I forgot to tell you, but Matthew has a bit of a crush on Carmen 🤣❤️.

Awwww 🥰  How old is Matthew again? Hehe, I’m not sure what Carter would think of that 😅

@mineralizedwritings

Hehe that’s a long story. Here’s the short version: Me and @theloonyone were swimming in a river one time together, and, because our imaginations go a lil crazy when we hang out, we started coming up with a river monster that lived in the river we were swimming in. We picked Johnny as a random guy to be an example of how the…[Read more]

@esther-c

he doesn’t eat people, but he will attack if provoked (which probably won’t happen)

@esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @theloonyone@mineralizedwritings @keilah-h
Oh and here’s a description: the normal classic dragon, gold scales, green eyes, six horns around his head, about the size of maybe two semi trucks (?), one wing is shredded so he can’t fly, dragon claw scars along the side of his injured wing, talks directly into peo…[Read more]

@esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h Ok, dargon time. (He’s not evil, but he will be a bit angry finding himself in a castle room that is much too small for him.)

Carter

Everyone’s friendly conversations were interrupted as the castle shook violently. Carmen stumbled and grabbed Carter’s hand to steady herse…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings Ok, cool I’ll put him in soon. Hopefully, he doesn’t scare Matthew and Tauren too much XD

@lightoverdarkness6 @theloonyone @esther-c @keilah-h

Carter

The little hall grew a bit loud with the sounds of people greeting and talking with one another. The more nervous or quiet people stayed farther back, including Crosshair,…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6 @theloonyone @esther-c @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h

Could I send in a dragon character that I have in to shake things up a bit? Maybe he could scare have the group away so that we have two smaller and more manageable groups? I won’t put him in right away. I can wait a bit.

@esther-c

Oh! Cool topic! I like your character’s names. I don’t usually worry too much about the name meaning, but I do have a couple.

Dante- (this one’s kinda obvious) based off of Dante’s inferno, he is a fire proof alien from a volcanic planet

Carmen- means song, she loves singing and dancing

Simon- means listen or God has heard

@mineralizedwritings

Ah! That is so cute! And how did you get her shadow so perfect? :O

@lightoverdarkness6

I don’t know if I’ve already said this, but Matthew is adorable and I love him. 💕

@koshka

You weren’t barging in. This is super helpful, especially the map! Thank you!

@folith-feolin @keilah-h

Thanks for the help!

@mineralizedwritings @theloonyone @lightoverdarkness6 @esther-c @keilah-h

I’m back! Carter and Carmen have just been standing awkwardly to the side this whole time, I guess.

Carter

A bell rang twice in Carter’s ears. Kaine and Everly were gone. Carter stared at the spot they had been.

He began to panic internally as he processed what had hap…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Oh cool! He’s trying to find the, uh… thing to the… place. Don’t want to spoil to whoever hasn’t figured it out yet 😆.  I’m starting to like Keiryn more and more.

@godlyfantasy12

Thanks! I still appreciated the flashback scenes, I just had to force myself to focus a little more.

@mineralizedwritings

There’s nothing wrong with being more sensitive to dark things! I really respect you bringing this whole thing up a not ignoring your instincts, yet still being so respectful to everyone. Honestly I noticed all the traumatic writing when I first joined too, but I dismissed it as teenage angst or just different writing styles XD