Loopy

@whalekeeper

And I’ve drawn Seb and Hugo so many times… I’ll definitely post some when I switch my sketches to digital!!

Ooo yay! I wanna see them! Especially Hugo ❤️

I want to watch Over the Garden Wall!!

You should!!! It’s a lil creepy, but the story is amazing and it has such cozy fall vibes.

Oh, and by the way, me and my siblings started Hilda…

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@freedomwriter76

Congrats on finishing! You work so fast!

Also that moodboard looks awesome. Have you read All Quiet on the the Western Front? It’s about WWI and it’s really great at showing what it felt like to be a soldier in the war. It’s also pretty dark, though (obviously. It’s about war.) so it might not be good for you to read if you’re…[Read more]

@euodia-vision @whalekeeper

Felicity

“I guess I’m the dragon in my world.”

Felicity squinted at the boy. Usually dragons were a bit… spikier? She shrugged.

“Me and Lois-” she began.

“Lois and I.” Lois corrected.

“Me and Lois are from Amberothe Scape. It has six main islands and is ruled by our amazing, wonderful, all-knowing King A…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

wow That’s really pretty!

@euodia-vision @whalekeeper

But, I mean, pirates, bees, same thing, right?

Y e s.

@whalekeeper

Awww I love these two so much! I’ve re-read this so many times. Your writing makes me want to draw. Poor Seb.

“I thought it was pretty at the restaurant, when you sang about relish and maple syrup.”

This line immediately made me think of 🎶”oh potatoes and molasses”🎶 XD Hehehehe. Sorry, you probably haven’t seen that show. I’m mostly…[Read more]

@princesachronicle22 @lightoverdarkness6

Jack 

Just as Tyler spoke, the closet door swung open into the hall again.

Jack stepped out, still talking to Cody over his shoulder. “You can’t just slam the door in someone’s face. Come on out ‘an introduce yerself.”

He turned to the two out in the hall and gave them both a respectful nod. “Sorry for…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Seriously, though, your writing style is my favorite. I can’t wait to read something you publish.

@whalekeeper

This might just be me being a grammar perfectionist, and you haven’t done it in a while, but I have noticed a couple times you have written sentences like this:

“He stopped at the door, listened.”

I’ve seen actual published authors do this too, so it’s probably not a big deal, but when I see it, it distracts me from the story bec…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Dude, I love your writing style so much though! I’m trying to find something in your role plays, but I might be better at critiquing a snippet (sorry you’re busy with school! If you can’t find one, that’s alright.). I’ll keep looking, though.

@whalekeeper

Aww, thanks! 😊

I wonder why I do it though?

Do you have any common tropes like that?

@keilah-h

Uh like a fourth of them are. I have a lot of characters XD

@keilah-h

Ok, well I can’t make him yell at them for something as little as that lol

Mr. Gregory 

Gregory rounded a corner and stopped suddenly in front of several (how many of them are there?) lizard-like students. One spun around and bared his teeth, but stopped when Mr Gregory wasn’t who he expected.

Who was he expecting, then?

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If you guys actually do end up doing a masquerade ball, I’d love to join later. That is, if there aren’t too many people already.

@whalekeeper @euodia-vision

Felicity 

“Decided to test the system?”

She shrugged. “School’s not really my thing.”

Lois looked at her disapprovingly. “You’ve never even been to school before.”

Felicity grinned at him and then quickly changed the subject.

“Anyway, like I was trying to ask earlier, what worlds are you guys from?”

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@whalekeeper

Oh I did just realize that I have this one character dynamic that I always fall into. It’s where one character is the super chaotic one and constantly wants to go do things and they have a friend/sibling/coworker/whatever who is always really chill and tired, maybe a bit grumpy. The chaotic character is always dragging around the…[Read more]

@calyhuge

XD thanks

Oh, cool! What a nice coincidink. I never specified the color, so they can be white if u want.

I hope Chero is now entertained lol

@euodia-vision @whalekeeper @calyhuge

Felicity 

“Filthy children! Get out of here! Thieves!” A scratchy high pitched voice cried out.

“Is that pudding?!? I just cleaned that! Achk! Chip dust! Out, foul speck! Get out, get out!!”

An old woman with leathery skin and hair as white as Felicity’s advanced on them from across the room. She brandish…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Yeah they’re pretty unpredictable, and in that, they’re predictable 🤯 At least, that’s how I write them (…Seb, since I don’t have any other official ENTP character yet). Trying to surprising, and always one-upping people.

Yeah exactly

I decided to stop thinking about it.

lol yeah probably a good choice

How accurate did you find your…

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