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whaley replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Moth
Not much time passed before a familiar, dark-headed boy appeared around the corner.
“Ari! I don’t know if we’re meant to be this far outside at night.” Moth pointed towards the greater expanse of land, hedges and small trees making up most of it. “We have to go farther.”
They walked casually through the dark, grassy grounds. Ari…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
XD
Ari
Moth disappeared through the roof in a last swirl of gold and dust. Silence settled in the shadows.
He hadn’t realized how much the bright younger boy had chased those shadows away. At least for a little while. Ari turned his back on the darkened room.
Time to break curfew. Again. The stairs creaked under his feet as he…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Currently Untitled Project (NEW!) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Here’s the things I thought of after my first readthrough. They may be slightly random.
1. I think the worldbuilding and magic system is introduced in understandable amounts (though I already knew some things about the magic system so I may not be the best judge)
b. It’s very engaging to read and if I picked this up in a bookstore and…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
I love how everyone who meets Ral has an instant dislike for him as soon as he opens his mouth XD I find it very amusing
Lol I’ll need to go read some of the other characters’ encounters.
Acharis
Acharis paused for a moment before following. His fingers closed around his sword. Just in case.
He didn’t speak. Asking questions wou…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
If it helps, he does eventually figure things out and have a relatively happy life.
Ok, good. I’m glad he gets a balance of good and bad experiences.
Moth
“Good.” Moth was outside the window now, and he faced Ari through it, a cool wind flicking its ghostly fingers through his hair.
He gave the human boy a last nod before he stood up on…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
If it helps, he does eventually figure things out and have a relatively happy life.
Ari
Squeamish? He hesitated a moment, considering what that was supposed to mean. He’d hunted and cleaned deer, helped in the stables, and patched up uncountable injuries of his own. He’d even helped burry a few of his father’s political enemies, as…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Eh….XD I’ll let you come to your own conclusions.
I’m worried for this boy. Clearly being a prince has caused him much turmoil.
Moth
“I’ll show you.” Moth got up, dusting off his legs, which only brushed off some scales and made more dust.
He pulled a wooden stob and rod out of a box. The stob was full of lumps and grooves, and he exp…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Ari… Are you ok?
Eh….XD I’ll let you come to your own conclusions.
Ari
Collecting stories. He followed Moth’s gaze up to the hole in the roof. Here he was, sitting on another boy’s floor, talking about stories like they were something you could gather up in a box.
Maybe they were. Maybe you could.
“I suppose I wouldn’t mind. H…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
That’s a lot of drama, for sure. Those generators sure know how to come up with random scenarios
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whaley replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Adventures…in his world those usually included being tied up or locked in a closet.
Ari… Are you ok?
Moth
“That’s what my adventures are for. To make the stories. But a lot of the stories are those I collect from the earth, and from my subjects.”
That gave him an idea. He gazed up at the open, foggy skylight, as tendrils of mist d…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Ahhhhh it atenmy reply.
Ari
Adventures…in his world those usually included being tied up or locked in a closet. Or that’s what his brother’s called it. He had a feeling that wasn’t the type Moth was thinking about.
He licked the honey off his fingers, considering. Not much light filtered through the small square in the roof. Not…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Moth
Most of the things Moth liked to do were difficult to explain. They were so specific to his own life, that some of his pastimes didn’t have names.
He stuffed the last bit of bread crust in his mouth. “I like going on adventures and telling stories.”
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Koshka replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Ari
This fairie King liked asking questions.
“Well, I…” He paused. What was left? His half-brothers were good at everything that mattered–warriors, diplomats, judges– “Haven’t really thought about it. What do you like to do?”
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whaley replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Moth
Moth gave Ari a slow, bright-eyed smile. Then his brows knitted together and he melted back into his normal, dead serious expression. He sucked the honey from his fingers. “I’m sure you’ll be a great archer. What else do you intend to get good at?”
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Koshka replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Ari
Breaf and honey. His mouth curved up despite himself. He took the food.
“I don’t think so, or at least…”
At least, not compared to the legends of his dead cousins.
“… Not yet.”
His fingers burned at the remembered thrum of wood, sinew, and feather singing from shot and shot. He shoved a bite of bread into his mouth to…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Moth
Ari sounded like he didn’t care about making friends, or at least, didn’t want to. But as he absently looked around the room, he didn’t look half as abrasive as before.
Moth got up and started unpacking the few boxes next to his sleeping bag. He found more packaged food. “You like archery? Are you any good?”
He broke bread in…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
“Depends on how you define friends. There’s a fellow in archery that doesn’t seem to mind practicing with me.”
“People usually don’t stick around after our first meeting.” Although, he didn’t typically end up sitting on a student’s bedroom floor talking about family and friends. He studied the dust swirling around them.
How did he get here?
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whaley replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
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