Kylie

@rae

To be fair, the Hebrew might allow for a something similar to fathering a nation when it says ‘this guy fathered this guy.’ Which would then not be dependent on time. I’m curious about this so I’ll have to ask my dad, he’s the Hebrew nerd.

And I totally called the gladiator fighting.

@ellette-giselle

Julian slowly shook his head.

Oh no…

Good section. The new prince’s beliefs make more sense now.

And we got to find out Leon’s backstory!! I’m glad, but… it really feels like you’re setting it up for him (and Julian?) to die. 🥺🥺

@theducktator

I don’t care too much either way. It’s not important to the Gospel or to proving the Bible.

The Bible implies a young Earth but doesn’t explain it outright. The Earth scientifically looks like it’s old but there are inconsistencies.

Jonas pointed out starlight. God wanted the lights to appear on the fourth day. Could the fourth…[Read more]

@loopylin

Barnes

For a second, Barnes imagined one of the cat monsters swallowing Mel whole. She watched the girl stroll down the path and pass beyond the tree and ferns. When the last fern stopped swaying from being pushed aside, Barnes stepped off the pavilion and followed at a distance.

@rae

Good luck!

@ellette-giselle

It’s okay!

@theducktator

Ah, this question.

I believe in a young earth, both scientifically and personally.

What is amazing to me is looking back at what we can figure out of how the Earth formed, and how that aligns with Scripture if you let Earth be young (Genesis 1 is shockingly scientific, so to speak).

(Plus, the Geologic record…there are some…[Read more]

@loopylin

Barnes

Barnes skimmed her hand over a cluster of flower bulbs on the pavilion. They looked more familiar to her now than at any other time- maybe because of how their colors grayed by moonlight. “I’m looking for a way back to my city. But I don’t want you to get lost too. You should find your way back before that happens. Not to say…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

I’ll keep working at it then 👍

(Haha, that’s how it is sometimes. Especially when you have a project you don’t have the bandwidth to pick up for large amounts of time.)

@loopylin

Barnes

Mel didn’t shiver from the cold at all, and her coat wasn’t wet; she bit her lip and studied the garden as if she owned the place herself.

“No. I’m trying to get out of here, actually.” Barnes adjusted her mask by grabbing the chin and pushing up. “Do you mind telling me why you’re here?”

@grcr

I’ll be praying.

@the_lost-journal

I will!

@whalekeeper

That’s awesome!!

Guys, my story snippet got chosen for critique for Crazy Editing Week out of a thousand people!! I’m very happy.

@ellette-giselle

Okay, that’s fine.

@ellette-giselle

Is there going to be a new section today? 🫣

@rae

Yep I meant the wall to be more normal on his side, I should have clarified.

@loopylin

Barnes

“I’m Barnes. What’s your name?”

@grcr Praying 🙏🤗

@rae

AH, I love the glowing effect!!

Your stylization has gotten a lot more confident and you’re so patient with the coloring! The color choices are also very nice and complement each other. You may say otherwise but I say this is a rousing success. *Stamp of approval*