Kylie

@keilah-h

Haha, true though. 😂

The guys I know can do the accent pretty well though, just cuz they’re so accustomed to it🤪

@keilah-h

Lolll 😂😂

The Aussies I know are actually redheads…

(Bro… I wonder if Andrew is stalking our conversation, seeing as he’s an Aussie 🤭)

@theshadow

It looks so much better! I love that we got to see their family now. I feel like I know the characters so much better already.

@keilah-h

what is it about them that we Americans find so fascinating??

I have no idea 😂 I guess Americans just have a boring flat accent so we like to hear something different 🤣

@liberty

I feel bad saying this because a couple others have said the same thing, but I can’t submit a story this time. 😭😭 School and other responsibilities took priority over writing these past couple of weeks and I wasn’t able to get much done. 😣 I’m so sorry!!

@elishavet-pidyon

I love that soo much!! That was always so sad to me. I didn’t know C. S. Lewis told everyone what happened to her afterward!

You should totally write it!!

@raxforge @loopylin

Syph

This hall was getting rather full of too tall people, but this place was probably full of such halls. He sighed. Best to find his way while there was someone of the Big hight on hand to see where they were going.

“Nay, my friend. I must decline your kind offer, although I certainly do appreciate your generosity. There…[Read more]

@jonas

You can give them to ME!

jk

@jonas

Lol.

Me, with 12: 😐

That’s excessive.

What’s the second? Ciale?

Ya. Also I forgot about another one that I kind of care about but it’s not even on the list cuz it doesn’t have a name and it has almost no development so I don’t know why I care but I do 🤷‍♀️

Well, if you ever don’t want that feature anymore, I’ll gladly use it!

NO. IT MI…

@jonas

Welll… I dunno. My brain has been more focused on art stuff than writing/worldbuilding stuff lately, so I haven’t gotten a lot of work done on my planets (I think at this point I only have, like, two that I care much about?). The floating islands idea (which was the whole main ‘thing’ for Thaliu) I’m not as interested in anymore, so I’m…[Read more]

@theshadow

I would love to see it!

@keilah-h @freed_and_redeemed

I have three new chapters!!! Guys this fanfic is literally so much fun to write and I have so manyyyyyyyyyy scene ideas for this fanfic and I don’t know how I’ll fit them all in

The O’Malley series by Dee Henderson has been a huge inspiration (it’s a Christian series that I highly recomme…[Read more]

@theducktator

Lol. Everything looks better with an ellipse.

I’ll watch that. 

@linus-smallprint

I will answer your audience questions in a few days when I have time. :]

@the_lost-journal @hybridlore

I think me and shadow are the only people on here who write anything creepy… 😂

You’re not the only ones. My Lovedream project is sci-fi fantasy mixed with horror, or something like that.

@theshadow

I’m following along! And I’ll answer any group questions you post; for now, I’ll stay quiet. *Ninja reads*

@linus-smallprint

Awesome! I approved it.

@keilah-h @ellette-giselle

Y’all were talking about British and Australian exclamations and it reminded me of something that happened recently…

So we have friends who are Australian, but their dad is the only one who actually naturally has the accent. I’m a sucker for the Aussie accent, lol. And I was talking with him one time and with some…[Read more]

Also, one thing I just thought of; we don’t really care about the characters’ families since we haven’t met them yet. Maybe it would be a good idea to lengthen the first chapter by showing Jack and Elina getting home and seeing their parents and siblings.

@theshadow

This chapter does a good job building up the suspense! The only thing I would say is yeah, Ellette has a point. These girls seem to be so mean for no real reason that I can guess at yet. It makes them feel flatter, rather than like actual people who have motives and stuff for their actions. Their ultimate goal, especially in a…[Read more]