LivGiordano

@rochellaine I meant to say characters.

@rochellaine I am working on perfecting my plot line and character for The Crimson Cup.  Are you rescuing Uncle Bill?

@ariel-ashira Yes, I’m still here!  What are you working on?

@rochellaine Im here!  Are you on still?

@seekjustice Thank you so much!

@ingridrd Oh, interesting. 🙂

Anyone want to join me in writing? @jenwriter17 @alia @ariel-ashira @skredder

@livgiordano, Okay Great! I can’t wait to have you in my KPA. I might in this next part. If not then the next (part 5). Is it ok if you are from a certain fantasy kingdom that a certain you came up with for a certain story? I just think that that would be awesome if you were a TD. do you know what I am talking about?

@princessfoo

True, that’s the main reason I wanted to keep Haylie who’s PoV I write from, though after I wrote a little of Macx’s I found I liked it more than Haylie’s.  I do think that it would still be losing some of what would be there if I did Macx’s PoV instead of Haylie’s though, so I’ll just try to do as much of Haylie’s as I can to try…[Read more]

@daughteroftheking

Those are good points, I think about those things while I’m writing it, thank you!

Yay! @supermonkey42 Thank you for critiquing this for me. It will be super helpful when I write my third draft. Too detailed? I was thinking it was not detailed enough. But I think I know what you mean. The thing is that we jump into the action at like chapter 3. So, I guess I could try to even it out between 2 and three a little more. I think…[Read more]

@ariel-ashira What I do is I pay attention when I’m singing to what kind of people are nearby.  When I’m in a group of conservative Christians, I sing only hymns.  Then, when I get to know someone better I’ll ask them what kinds of songs they are comfortable with, and if they prefer just hymns/Christian music I’ll continue to sing hymns, but if t…[Read more]

@ariel-ashira Praying for you!

@rochellaine @sam-kowal @seekjustice

I have another thought on singing.  I was reading in Romans this morning, and I read the part where Paul was talking about not offending other believers.  Do you think that sing “shady” songs, might cause younger, weaker believers to stumble?

@livgiordano I got them.  I cant wait to read them!

@livgiordano, of course. Aw, thanks. Um, one question. Can you have like actually Rapunzel length hair? Or do you want it to be your true length? Do you want me to write you as yourself, write you as your self with additional quirks, or add something in particular to your character.

@skredder, Haha, don’t worry. I am sure my mind is somewhere. I…[Read more]

@seekjustice What do you do for second degree burns?  I just tried to google it, and then backed out of a website instead of reading it because I was afraid there would be pictures of the burns there… 😛  I mean, I know generally what you do for burns, but I want to know if there’s any specific treatment that a paramedic or EMT would give on t…[Read more]

@skredder

Better than it has, not as good as it could be.

That describes a large amount of nearly everything I do… 😀

Yup!  Almost done, though.  Hooray!

@seekjustice Well, I can understand that, but it still implies that he was trying to be romantic, while the rest of the scene (as well as what we know of his character) really doesn’t indicate that at all.  The first time he says “romantic” it’s a joke, and a little flirtatious, which is fine, but the second time it just sounds really weird. 🙁  S…[Read more]

@skredder Short stories, huh?  I love writing short stories!  Except…I rarely finish them. 😛  I’ve finished a couple though.  How’s it going now?

@seekjustice That was not fifteen minutes.  That was an hour. 😛  Looks like I’m bad at giving estimates!

But anyway, I’m here now, and it looks like you’re about to leave. 🙁  By the way, I did give you the comment about Justice, but I put it in your document instead of here.  Did you get it?

@skredder Hi!