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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 2 days ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Thoughts: Art, Illustrating, &c. in the forum Art 1 week, 3 days ago
I recommend a portfolio page, a contact form, and an ‘About Me’ page.
Sounds good! *takes note*
I might take you up on the help if stuff gets complicated.
(Though I should really make one for myself first.)
Lol. Yeah, that might be a good idea. Sounds like me trying to teach kids how to build a prayer life. Or sew.
Ah. Well if…
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 week, 3 days ago
Ducktator, did you see that note I added on the idea of using a slave to push Alan in the direction of trusting and obeying The Saviour? What are your thoughts on that?
I’m not sure. I see how it would help your story, and it’s an interesting perspective to take. My main concern would be people thinking you support slavery. I…[Read more]
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Kefa replied to the topic The potato army WIP. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 5 days ago
awesome! Glad I could be of help.
I think we’re all a little defensive of our stuff. 😂
I remember when you kept criticizing Aaron I was crushed because he’s a lot like me and I felt like you were criticizing me and saying I was a cardboard cutout. It took a few weeks for me to separate myself from him and see your cri…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 5 days ago
@linus-smallprint you’re welcome! Looking forward to book 2!
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Kefa replied to the topic The potato army WIP. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 5 days ago
Thanks for getting back! I will try to make it slower! 😁
and I will only share the other projects!
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Kefa replied to the topic The potato army WIP. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 5 days ago
Should I tag some people!? I guess so. Â ^^^^^^
@keilah-h @rae @ellette-giselle @theducktator @grcr @linus-smallprint @raxforge @whalekeeper @loopylin @arcticanimals @esther-c @jonas
hello, hybrid lore told me to tag people if I wanted them to give feedback over my stuff, so if you guys wouldn’t mind, could you judge my story? Thanks! 😅
(it is…[Read more]
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 week, 5 days ago
As a reader, is this a direction you would be satisfied to see the story take?
Yes
What do you think of the character development you see in this (specifically for Alan, Martha, Eric, and Cyrus)?
Seems solid.
Now that you’ve seen some more, what are your thoughts on the similarities between Eric and Kalmar?
I think it’s d…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 week, 6 days ago
i really love the direction.
character development seems good and solid. But it’s hard to know that from just reading an outline.
again, it all depends on how you play it, but I was feeling Eustace and dragon change more than Kalmar and wolf. (Even though it is a wolf) I think you’re fine and should go for it. I can let you…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 6 days ago
I like this much better. I feel more comfortable, but it also plays into the allegory style better. (At least  in my opinion)
my only suggestion (besides fine combing because there were a few typos) is old be this paragraph.
I do not know what Alan thought as he used the spell, so instead of telling you that, let’s say he in…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks ago
thank you both for the sympathy and prayers!!
Great timing!
thank you!! I was proud of that one. 😂
oh dear! I hope you end up liking Roland then. 😅
I promise it was completely coincidental.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks ago
@linus-smallprint I think that works!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Thoughts: Art, Illustrating, &c. in the forum Art 2 weeks ago
Thank you for the resources!
I come from a photographer’s family, so we have actually used Adobe PhotoShop for years. Unfortunately, the license went out of date and we got to find out why so many people grump about it. O.O
I’ve heard about ProCreate from a calligraphy site I follow too. I might look into it.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Thoughts: Art, Illustrating, &c. in the forum Art 2 weeks ago
Being an illustrator is one of my ambitions as well. I’ve never been commissioned to do anything yet. I did talk to one publishing company… but my art style did not fit the needs of the author they have…. (Once I have a few interior illustrations for my book that I am satisfied with, I will send them over to this company a…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @liberty
Okay, little UPDATE y’all.
We had a death in the family. (don’t worry, not someone I even met before. He was on my dad’s side of the family and they’re all messed up.) Anyhow, due to craziness and the fact that my dad is the only sane person on that sid…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Thoughts: Art, Illustrating, &c. in the forum Art 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Good grief, she’s insane!! That art is amazing!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Thoughts: Art, Illustrating, &c. in the forum Art 2 weeks, 1 day ago
sure thing
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Hmm, I don’t like the sound of “convincing” people of God or sin or any other such thing.
But I do agree that our sin is a big factor.
I can add a little bit more in there though.
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