Linus Smallprint

@rae

Awwww Chase <333

@whalekeeper

Awww!

Oooohhh I love long books lol…whenever I read a super long book I feel so powerful lollll XD

@grcr

I understand taking a break, I had to do the same thing with my novel!

You take as long as you need, girly <3

I’d love the link if you’re okay with sharing it!!!!!!

Just know that even though sometimes it feels really overwhelming and like some days you can’t bring yourself to write a single word, you’re still a very talented and capable…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

One more thing I should mention. Another reason I saw this is because I took a break between when Amelia first starts feeling unwell and when she screams she has the plague

Okay then, I’ll just leave it.

Joseph getting discouraged because he is comparing himself to others is something that is quite relatable to me, so I think…

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@the_lost-journal @theshadow

I vote A, L, and X.

@liberty

But I can’t continue until I figure out exactly what fictional ingredients two of my characters like on their sandwiches.😫

@linus-smallprint

Oh I thought it was fine. It seems like a foretelling that she’s going to become a key character later on. As long as that’s true, I say keep it.

You’re welcome for the feedback!

@whalekeeper

HA! I got a majority of those!!

@rae

I read the beginning of your story (sorry it took me a while to get to it) and I think it’s interesting. If you post the rest when you’re finished, please tag me!

@koshka

Ha!!! That is so good! That is just perfect! Yup, that’s how his brain works. Barnes is a little to close to the life Rory knows. He doesn’t know what to do with Leo, so he’s wound up trusting him.

@whalekeeper    @koshka

Rory

Rory swallowed and looked at Leo. He was still uncomfortable, but the picture had gotten to him in a way nothing else had. Leo was the only person he had encountered who had people like that around who loved each other. Obviously this was something close to the woman’s heart. Rory licked his dry lips, eyeing her si…[Read more]

@koshka   @whalekeeper

Rory

Rory stared back at her. He had survived by hiding his every thought and emotion. He could play this game just as well as she could. Straightening, he let the expressionless mask slide over his face. “Trust is not a word in my vocabulary,” he said tonelessly. “For all I know you’re just trying to jeep my alive so t…[Read more]

@whalekeeper    @koshka

Rory

stiffened at her touch. He stood very still, his mouth tightening in a thin line of pain as the cloth bound up his wounds. “Why?” He asked again. “What am I to you?”

koshka

Sorry. I think I just got blood all over Leo’s uniform. lol.

@whalekeeper   @koshka

Rory

Rory tightened his hold on Leo’s arm. “But why? what do you stand to gain?” He forced his voice to remain steady, trying to ignore the blood that dripped from his fingers onto the cobblestones.

@whalekeeper

*barnes seems to have a thing for ripping clothing. lol*

@koshka

Rory

For a moment Rory felt like he was going to be sick. He knew he could never run, and even if he could possible force his body to move that would mean leaving Leo. He looked at the woman for a long time. At last, he spoke. “Why?”

@koshka

*gasp*

Oh my goodness! Are you okay!

*covers mouth to hide  laughter*

@koshka

*blink*

That is depressingly funny.

@whalekeeper

Ah, I get it. Not like I’ve done that before

@koshka

Same! I average about five to ten to every 300 or so pages. I doubt people notice all of them, but I still go crazy.