Linus Smallprint

@keilah-h

Thank you!

@whalekeeper @keilah-h @theshadow @esther-c @freed_and_redeemed @grcr

I might add someone else later, but for now I’m just doing one.

Ayla (I haven’t given her a last name yet)

Age: 15

Species: Human

Appearance: Ayla is 5′ 7”, with pale skin, thick wavy dark brown hair, dark brown eyes, and high cheekbones. She is slender, and typically…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

*Takes spinach ice cream, tries it* Ugh! Why did I suggest anyone should try this?

Um yeah!!! Why on earth did you do that!!

Nearly made me gag.

@rae

Oh no! That’s sad! I LOVE your art!

I understand though. Sometimes you just can’t draw. lol.

@theshadow

Thank you! I’m so glad you like it!
I’ll keep the 23rd in mind.

@savannah_grace2009

Well thank you so much for the help that you did give me! I’ll miss you!

@ellette-giselle

I agree with Whaley…I need to step away too.

@theducktator

Oh, he’s a human?

That’s fair lol.

@highscribeofaetherium

I guess Natalie’s not good at stabbing?😂 And since he’s a real person, my mom wouldn’t let me kill him.

@theducktator

😂

Oh my. Stabbing him whenever possible? How is this guy not dead?

@highscribeofaetherium @grcr

Here’s a scene from the end of Chapter 1:

The ducks flew off to meet the rebellion. First they dropped glitter bombs, before flying down. The rebels fled at the onslaught of glitter, all except for The Dope, who attacked Natalie. However, she was ready for him. She flew just out of his reach, darting down and stabbing…

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@linus-smallprint

I’ve been very busy the past few weeks. Sorry it took me so long to show up here. *hands you spinach ice cream* Anyway, I started your story, and I’m really enjoying it!

@linus-smallprint

I knew it.

I KNEW IT!!!

I knew they were the faithful the minute I met Martha and Eric I knew it! I honestly did!

Hmm, I like Stripe. He’s going to be an interesting character.

@whalekeeper

Oh please forgive me if it’s anything unkind that I said! If it truly is just a preference in writing then that’s okay. I just hope I didn’t offend you!

@linus-smallprint

Not sure why you are apologizing here. Your ideas are welcome.

Maybe the fact that you are the first person to say that to me has something to do with it…… I normally get told to let other people be the authors of their own stories and stick to mine.

You know you’re a writer when you hear a particularly beautiful line in a song and think about it for hours.

@whalekeeper

Is there a goal fulfilled within this first book? I’ve read and watched many series of media, and the ones that make the best impression have an end goal for the entire series and goals for each book/episode.

Yes, of course there is. I wouldn’t write a book without an end goal.

If you have studied story structure that deeply, you sho…

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@savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper

Someone is having a hard time staying off until Christmas. lolololololol 😀

You might need to try outlining books based on a plot structure…like the Three Act Structure, because it hooks your readers more and you can kind of sense them pushing toward a goal.

Hmmm, well, I have to disagree. I will NEVER start a…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

HOW DO YOU DO THAT?!??!?!

Wow it’s like you can read my mind lol!

Anyways….

@ellette-giselle

I totally agree with what Whaley said.

The time jumps just take away so much from the story (even at the beginning where Aaron and Turin were working together) and it makes me lose interest. You do great at describing outside of the…[Read more]