Linus Smallprint

@jonas

I’m usually the opposite, I get so excited about writing the first chapter that I write a couple pages, then start worldbuilding for real, and then I write a blurb. Though I haven’t done a lot of that, either. (Unfortunately, I write way more than I plan sometimes.) I usually find myself with a lot of chapters that don’t make much sense in…[Read more]

@jonas

I think I like Tempest and Flamebreaker the best.

I like your blurb! I would totally read that if it was in a library!

@thearcaneaxiom

I just read through the second chapter, and I really like it! How do you come up with these ideas? I could never, lol. I’m having problems just coming up with a simple magic system, haha.

Great work! Also, I like the second cover, because it shows the “reflection” thing that Talien was diagnosed with and I like the theme/design…[Read more]

@jonas

yeah, I do agree with you it is realistic, I’m just experimenting with Marcurious a bit. But you’re right, Marcurious does end up having a sort of breakdown later.

The more I think about it, I guess that character arc is Marcurious a little bit, after he spends a week in the UNIT, hehe (insert evil laughter and horrible smells. bwahaha!).…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

I really like the chapter! You did really well explaining things, but not info-dumping. One question, though, if Tailen is going to starve to death, wouldn’t he die of dehydration first? Or was that explained and I just missed it?

As for the covers, the first one is simpler, which might be good, but the other one is cool too. N…[Read more]

@jonas @thearcaneaxiom

Marcurious now has a catch phrase, lol.

Well, I’m dead. 

@jonas

Well…you have great points!

I think that Marcurious is an interesting one, because he’s just used to having his way and getting himself out of trouble that he doesn’t see this as any different. He sees himself as a “god” of sorts, and sees the Pythonos as just another challenge that he can overcome.

By the way, is his ability to turn…

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@rae

Pumpkin spice lattes? Or no? okay…I have never had a latte, let alone a Pumpkin Spice one. But, I do like Pumpkin Spice to begin with, so most likely yes.

Pumpkin spice lattes are THE BEST. LATTES are the best. I would totally reccomend….lol.

@rae

I love that, lol.

@spinner4him

I struggle with titles a lot too!

I usually just wait until the title comes to me (after all, the story’s more important than the title), and sometimes I have a temporary title until I can come up with a good one. I would say don’t rush it, because if you’re anything like me, it’s a distraction from your actual project and you’ll…[Read more]

@acancello @trailblazer @grcr @rae @sarafini @mineralizedwritings

Ottoline

She never thought that she would enjoy dancing. Not in a million years. But here she was, fighting back a smile as Hugo held her in his arms. She felt like she was turning traitor on her inner being. But somehow, she didn’t care. She didn’t want this moment to end.

When…[Read more]

@jonas

Ok

@jonas

I think Conviction, Skyshard and Midnight are my favorites. Retribution looks a little boring and blocky, and I think it’s because of the square edges on the cross-guard. Also, it does seem a little odd that there’s only one single-edged sword.

@acancello

He nodded and sat down with a thud, “Kari thinks the food is… is… poisoned,”

“I doubt it, you would have already been the first to pass out if it was.”
Lane was a bit miffed about Hugos not very nice, but true reaction. “Fine. It may not be, but still…” He trailed off thinking hard.

haha!

@acancello

Do you want to write the next RP? I wasn’t sure if you wanted to or not since Hugo and Ottoline are dancing and I did the last one?

@spinner4him

Sounds great!

@grcr

A noise made Lane quickly look up. His eyes fell on the tall person standing in front of the door. When he noticed the green sword in the man’s hand, he shivered from head to toe. Oh boy. Must be a warrior. The… THE HOUSE PROBABLY SENT HIM TO MAKE SURE WE ALL DANCE!! I’M DOOMED.

Oh my gosh I love this that’s hilarious!!!