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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
THIS IS SO CUTE!!
Livia
“Are you sure?” she laughed.
“Definitely,” Lukas nodded. Xandro snorted, slowly bringing his nose closer to the milkshake.
“Um…no. You already had candy,” Liv gave him a look.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
Ooops I just realized I forgot to put something in Italics but I’m too scared to edit it in case it deletes my post…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
So essentially the Great One sent him to help Sef by showing what was happening to her in a dream, if that makes sense.
Lilitu’s been having that same dream for a while now, and later it makes him feel like it’s his fault because he could have helped Sef earlier if he’d just taken action sooner.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
Okay…so this scene/chapter comes before the scene where Iver abuses Sef. (I just wrote it last night after looking at the plot and realizing I’d forgotten a major part!!!)
Anyways….
The girl opens her mouth and screams.
Her screams echo off the walls, begging for someone, anyone to hear her.
Her pain is vivid,…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Ember of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Zahlin
Zahlin pointedly ignored her. Though it probably wouldn’t help anything.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Ember of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Zahlin
“Leave me alone. I didn’t ask for your company.” Zahlin said.
Wow. Just, wow. The sword said, Your social skills never fail to amaze me, Zahlin.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Zahlin
Zahlin glowered at her. “I don’t have time for this.” He snapped, “Get out of my way.”
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Zahlin
Zahlin grunted and resumed his walk.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 7 months ago
I’m not sure I understand your question 🤔
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Zahlin
Zahlin eyed the girl. “I… don’t know.”
Walking. That’s how we got here. Walking. We walked over here from back over there. The sword said, Remember?
Zahlin’s gloved fist tightened on the hilt of the sword. It was dangerously close to letting itself slip and speaking aloud.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Zahlin
Zahlin’s hand immediately went to his sword. He relaxed slightly after a moment, but his hand didn’t leave his sword. She appeared mostly harmless, but vigilance always paid off. The most unlikely people could turn out to be assassins.
Can I talk to her? The sword asked, She seems nice.
“No.” He said to both of them.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Zahlin twenty or so years ago likely would have been similar. He used to be an honorable fighter (and just person, in general).
I know, it’s very hard to imagine.
Realn rant, sorry
No worries. I like listening to people rant about their cool stuff.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Zahlin
Zahlin surveyed the streets around him. Nothing was familiar.
This place doesn’t look like home, Said a bright, cheery voice in his head, it’s a whole new place full of more people you can get after your blood!
“You are way too happy about this.” Zahlin said, “Actually, I take it back. You’re way too happy about everything.”
I’m an …[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 7 months ago
Hello!! I’m Bridget! Well, I am a great appreciator of swords and knives and fire, and I may or may not be slightly insane. I’ll leave that up for you to decide. Aside from those things, I like reading, writing, drawing, listening to music (while I do one of the previous three activities), playing piano, doing karate, playing vid…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
HEHEHEHEHEHE…
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Oh no. OH NO. YES.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
I guess I should reintroduce my character.
Zahlin
Let’s see… ragged black hair, (still haven’t decided on eye color XD), somewhere around six-and-a-half feet tall. Red cloak over otherwise dark clothing. He has a permanent death glare, which usually makes him look like he has murderous intentions. He’s a brutal fighter and is perfectly fine wi…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
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