Linus Smallprint

@keilah-h

Haha! You’re good!

@savannah_grace2009

I always thought of him as our older brother, but somehow it never clicked until you said that! lol. I was kinda like, “I’m pretty sure I’m the only person who thinks this way, and I’m not sure if it’s right…..”

Wow, I love the picture you have just painted in my mind!

@keilah-h

I think it’s yours. Last RP was page 462.

@ellette-giselle

I knowww!

I kind of already knew He was technically our brother, but part of me wasn’t sure if He wanted us to consider Him as an older brother…idk, I wasn’t sure if it was respectful or not.

And then one day I found that verse in Hebrews and I was like

WHAAAAAA?!?!?

And everything made sense lol!

Like Jesus loves us so…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Sara, I’m sitting here a little open mouthed right now. I mean, I’ve always know than, but I never thought of us having that empty spot because He’s supposed to fill it!

@smiley

if you don’t mind me asking, what’s it like being the oldest? Like I see everywhere that being the oldest sister is like a ton of work and by the end you have mental health issues and then struggle for the rest of your life but I mean you published a book so clearly you’re proving them wrong

in fact most of the people I know who have…

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@grcr

Oh yayyy a purple heart!!!

(purple’s my favorite color lol!)

Awww I’m always here for you <3

💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

@rae

Awwww Chase <333

@whalekeeper

Awww!

Oooohhh I love long books lol…whenever I read a super long book I feel so powerful lollll XD

@grcr

I understand taking a break, I had to do the same thing with my novel!

You take as long as you need, girly <3

I’d love the link if you’re okay with sharing it!!!!!!

Just know that even though sometimes it feels really overwhelming and like some days you can’t bring yourself to write a single word, you’re still a very talented and capable…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

One more thing I should mention. Another reason I saw this is because I took a break between when Amelia first starts feeling unwell and when she screams she has the plague

Okay then, I’ll just leave it.

Joseph getting discouraged because he is comparing himself to others is something that is quite relatable to me, so I think…

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@the_lost-journal @theshadow

I vote A, L, and X.

@liberty

But I can’t continue until I figure out exactly what fictional ingredients two of my characters like on their sandwiches.😫

@linus-smallprint

Oh I thought it was fine. It seems like a foretelling that she’s going to become a key character later on. As long as that’s true, I say keep it.

You’re welcome for the feedback!

@whalekeeper

HA! I got a majority of those!!

@rae

I read the beginning of your story (sorry it took me a while to get to it) and I think it’s interesting. If you post the rest when you’re finished, please tag me!

@koshka

Ha!!! That is so good! That is just perfect! Yup, that’s how his brain works. Barnes is a little to close to the life Rory knows. He doesn’t know what to do with Leo, so he’s wound up trusting him.

@whalekeeper    @koshka

Rory

Rory swallowed and looked at Leo. He was still uncomfortable, but the picture had gotten to him in a way nothing else had. Leo was the only person he had encountered who had people like that around who loved each other. Obviously this was something close to the woman’s heart. Rory licked his dry lips, eyeing her si…[Read more]

@koshka   @whalekeeper

Rory

Rory stared back at her. He had survived by hiding his every thought and emotion. He could play this game just as well as she could. Straightening, he let the expressionless mask slide over his face. “Trust is not a word in my vocabulary,” he said tonelessly. “For all I know you’re just trying to jeep my alive so t…[Read more]

@whalekeeper    @koshka

Rory

stiffened at her touch. He stood very still, his mouth tightening in a thin line of pain as the cloth bound up his wounds. “Why?” He asked again. “What am I to you?”