Linus Smallprint

@hybridlore

Yeah. A friend told me to split it or else he’ll wait to read it when he’s in solitary confinement. 😂

@keilah-h

Yeah! I’m glad you mentioned Julian. Most of the focus seems to be on Leon. I wonder why………… 🤔🤣

Do you think I’m really gonna tell you that?

one thing I’ll suggest, is that I feel like you don’t really introduce the family to us in the first few chapters. At first I wasn’t even sure if Blake was their sibling or not XDXD

They do have a HUGE family, so setting a solid foundation and making all the siblings and the parents unique and established in our minds would be a big thing you…[Read more]

@esther-c

Sorry it took me so long to get to this!!!
I like it a lot!!!! <3 keep it up!!!!

@hybridlore

I don’t know. You see, because I split Leon and Julian’s story, this book got to 1200+ book pages, so I’m going to cut it in half, but it’s still one full book on the Word Document. I think we only have about 100 Word Doc pages left before the place I planned to split the book, but I could be mistaken.

@loopylin

I love those! 🤣

@hybridlore

Hmm, I’m not sure.

I think we have close to 100 pages left.

@hybridlore

Please tell me you’re not really going to kill him off.

*goes back and rereads section*

He felt himself shaking and he tried to twist away from the source of the blows but couldn’t. As darkness closed in, the pain began to lesson until all he could feel was fire burning through him.

The overseer struck again and again and aga…[Read more]

@hybridlore

But Albee has…..

@hybridlore

Why not?

@the_lost-journal

Praying!

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NEXT SECTION!!

One evening, Julian was walking home alone from visiting a family and bringing a basket of food Adeline had prepared for them. It was growing dusk, and he was almost out of the alleys when a voice hailed him. “You, stranger, it looks like y…

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@loopylin

Noooo!!! You can put Rory in jail, but leave poor Leo alone!!!!!

@rae

AW!!!

They’re so cute!!! I really love that!

They’re super sweet!

@loopylin

XD Mateo would be right on the line of arson and murder, lol

@whalekeeper

I understand that is what Marcel would do, but Mateo kinda already grabbed him when he first fell and Mateo has let go of him ever since

@rae

YAY!! You posted art!

@the_lost-journal

“Long live the Lord of the Squirrels.” -squirrel in dark ally

@loopylin

We could also use a simpler ttrpg game system…

We could if that’s what everyone wants but I’m more used to the DnD 5e rules. And if we wanted to do a longer campaign with multiple sessions, 5e would be better I think, though I could be wrong

Google meet is fine with me, but im pretty sure it shares your email with everyone.

Well, we…[Read more]

@hybridlore

seems to be a mutual favorite!

Looks like that scene is a good one. 😁

I’m excited to see if/how Leon reaches Ian.

you may regret saying that…………..

@the_lost-journal

“Yes, your assignment is to try and spread misinformation about the Duck Queen. And redirect the potato killing in the News station to someone else other than us. If all goes wrong, we’ll break you out of jail and give you asylum in the Squirrel Kingdom. Is your mission clear.” -squirrel in dark ally