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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @liberty
NEXT SECTION!!
The sixteenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
December 10th
The EmpireTo Johannes, Heinrich, and the brothers at the University,
Greetings in the name of our Lord, Jesus Christ
Such wonderful news! Prince Dietrich, son of Emperor Haid…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Really?!?! You called it?
Oooh!!! He’s about to become the Josiah.
Maybe so!
So, is he your new favorite? I was pretty sure he would be.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
I know! It took Leon getting captured to sober him up a bit I guess.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 5 months ago
I know that I haven’t really been on or much or posted recently but I have been and am praying for everyone.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 5 months ago
I think that’s a great idea.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Group Art Challenges! in the forum Art 1 year, 5 months ago
I vote B.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Yay!! I’m glad I caught you by surprise at least. 😂
It took about a month honestly. I learned web design so I could do it. I was motivated.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Potato news 64 in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Potato news 64 in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Oh, I thought she’d voted.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
I liked the Wilhelm-actually-Prince-Deitrich twist.
Did you see it coming?!?!
Linus will say he did. 100% 😂
Pretty cool that he’s now a Christian… but it’s going to be very dangerous.
Ya don’t say?……………
😂
Aw thank you!!!! I’m so glad! What do you think??!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @liberty
NEXT SECTION!!
The next Sabbath, Hans did not return, but Julian was pleased to see Marius slip in and sit down. With him was a young man who appeared to be in his mid to late teens. Marius leaned over and whispered something to his companion who nodded. Ju…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Something I haven’t mentioned. I’m doing it between any possible sequel to CR.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
I have a book I’m about to start writing once I wrap up CR, and I think you’re gonna go head over heals for the MC. Or the MC’s best friend. One of the two. It’s going to be a you sort of book. 😂
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
I don’t know. It didn’t really stand out to me, but then from your notes I knew it was going to happen.
Whaley did make a strong point.
I think you could go either way.
Honestly, maybe a mix is best.
Either your original way with a little more listening, or Whaley’s way with a little more anger.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Celarent
Celarent folded his arms and gave Mateo a disdainful look. He hadn’t actually called Bird Boy by that nickname out loud had he? He knew the rules. Only mock people behind their back. Saying it to their faces made you sound juvenile. He groaned inwardly. He’d already broken rule 6: Forge an allyship with those in…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 5 months ago
Now I’m depressed. 😭 I think Baron made the right decision though. But whyyyyy.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
It did seem a bit off character. I don’t know that she’d necessarily be considerate, but I think she’d be more annoyed than mad. Or if she is mad, it’d be for getting them in this mess to begin with.
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Mateo
Mateo looked at the kid, he said in a threatening voice, “Don’t make that mistake again.” He then turned to little fellow and said in his ‘light-hearted’ voice, “Where too, Pequeño?”
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