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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 5 days ago
Yeah I know. At first I could never see it fitting, but the more I listened to it the more I kept thinking about these guys, (specifically Leon for some reason) so now it has to be the book theme song, because I think about them every time. 😂
Ah, I get it.
We didn’t do Aladdin because of the clothing the girls are wearing. I have…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 5 days ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 5 days ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @liberty
Look y’all, whatever you may think…. this is actually the truth.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 5 days ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 5 days ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty
For all those it may concern…. I would call this the theme song if this book.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 5 days ago
Well, I’ve never seen that movie. Just heard of it. And I like the song “Speechless” but other than that I know nothing of it besides it taking place in Arabia. lololol.
But that IS how I feel!!!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 5 days ago
Long story. If you read back, it’s just on the last page or two. She tried to steal my character Alec to stop me from taking hers, but then I said Alec was too far away for her to take him, so we agreed that it was a misunderstanding and she’d kidnapped some random bystander.
That’s funny. I like Leon better 😝
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 5 days ago
@liberty lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 5 days ago
@liberty that must be weird.
imagine showing your dad that picture and saying “My online friend made a bad guy who has your name.”
Don’t do that lol
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 5 days ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty
For anyone who is interested…..
Hassan (center) and two of the other slave traders.
(and yes, they are in their native country in this picture)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 6 days ago
Woah…um…do I want to ask this?…yes…I will…
So, uh, who whipped you?
Uh… I don’t remember.
We were in a group of friends and a few of the guys had horse whips that they added crackers to the ends of. They were trying them out, and one of the guys snapped his back and it cut me across the back of the arm.
Then there was another t…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 6 days ago
Right! He’s not Arab…but half Turkish.
*passes out elegantly on couch.*
Yes…I was behind and just speeding to catch up…
*pops up*
So, what do you think? (I assume you finished the section?)
Even if we fail…we should at least try…
That’s the spirit! *pounds you on the back*
And yes, you have discovered the new squad created jus…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 6 days ago
I already attempted to do so and got out-debated.
She took fake-Alec. 😖You don’t care about Leon?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 6 days ago
@liberty *whispers* I think we’re just encouraging her. . . 👀😟
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 6 days ago
Wow. I have not gotten this good of a reaction in a long time!!!
I’m LOVING THIS!!!
I mean, I got an entire new squad created just for me!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 6 days ago
*gasp of horror*
OH MY WORD!!!
No way!!!
Oh wow! Yikes! Goodness!!!!
I HAD NO IDEA!
Well at least it’s spelled differently and your father is not Arab. (right?)
Goodness! The amount of names of family members I’ve used? *faints*
OH MY GOSH!!!!! OW. OW. OW!!!
YES! Ow is right!!! Those things HURT!!
I got one across the arm…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 6 days ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 6 days ago
Yes, they are a different people group. I plan on having more on all of this later.
Okay. I’ll mention the ink just for you.
haha! I’m glad you’re so sucked in!!!
Have you thought about changing either Roland’s or Rolf’s name?
*screeches* Nooooo!!!! Nononononono.
I have deliberated over each and every name and the means ref…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 6 days ago
@linus-smallprint @Liberty @Hybridlore @Koshka @elishavet-pidyon @Keilah-h
NEXT SECTION!!!
(If I was Freedom I’d be posting trigger warnings. But y’all have been amply warned.)Leon woke the next morning to find one of the men cutting the ropes that bound his wrists. One arm came free, and Leon gasped from the pain that…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 6 days ago
Yay!! You caught up!
I feel like at least one of the other characters should be saying something here. I just listened to N.D.Wilson on dialogue…and it felt to me that the other people weren’t even there as just those two kept talking.
Ack. I KNEW it! Ugh. I didn’t want to admit it, but I new it needed it.
Where did those sla…
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