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Esther replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Ok, awesome, thank youuuu! :))
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Esther replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
What’s the word limit again??
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP Suggestion in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 weeks, 4 days ago
I looked it up. The wolf is adorable! But, does he have a name?
Not that I am aware of. We can just call him Phil.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty
NEXT SECTION!!!
The next morning, both young men were extremely tired. They ate a light breakfast, but neither of them felt like getting up and walking again. Leon decided to lay down and doze for another hour or so, and Julian pulled out the book from J…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
oh good. lololol.
The way that he says dunderheaded in the Scottish accent in the drama! Priceless!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
He did, in his way. And he’ll address it again soon enough.
WHAT!?!? You don’t like that one? (or are you choking with laughter?)
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP Suggestion in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 weeks, 5 days ago
I love your new profile picture!!! Did you draw that?
Thank you!
No, I did not draw this one. It’s from a comic strip called ‘Customer Service Wolf’ that I recently discovered. As someone who works in retail, I found it relatable and funny.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
yeah. They’re tall. Just not tall as Ardentans.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
So, Ardentans are very tall. (Averaging on the higher end of six feet for men, and the lower end of six feet for women)
The people of the Empire are more average, perhaps a little on the shorter side. Leon and Julian are considered tall in their country, but they are only about the height of average Ardentan women.
Lol. I just always…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty
NEXT SECTION! 2
It was after sunset, and Julian and Leon were walking alone in the dim light. “So, how should we go about this?” Julian asked.
“I say the same as we did when on the run in Ardenta. We’ll try to get a place to sleep with a family, shar…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty
NEXT SECTION!
(In case anyone hasn’t noticed, I’m starting out small because this is the beginning after all. I think the sections will get bigger soon, and I’ll also maybe post some more today.)
Julian sat down on a rock by the path and drew in several dee…
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Kefa replied to the topic WIP Suggestion in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 weeks ago
I take German! I invented the quote myself! 😂
Yes…the story is about an immortal family because they drank this special water…a girl meets one of the brothers and they fall in love. But, she’s not sure about marrying him because he’s immortal…you can look the whole story up.
Interesting! And I was planing on something like that happening…[Read more]
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Kefa replied to the topic WIP Suggestion in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 weeks ago
No, I have never heard of “Tuck Everlasting”. But it is about immortality?
What? How does that happen?
Hee hee hee… go to google translate, translate it from English to German… then in the English box type “Twelve” just like that.
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Kefa replied to the topic WIP Suggestion in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 weeks ago
Oh, then yes, and no.
Yeah, I am still considering which time periods I should choose from! And fort the very important question, I have already started working on her origin! I was thinking maybe that she had a test or a choice that was like a choice from God, and she was given the curse of immortality or something like that!…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks ago
It would be you who figured it out. Everyone else has read these books, and then you swoop in and find it! haha!
I am.
Empirians!
*dies*
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks ago
HA! Got it!!
Ardentan’s have a French/Irish/English culture.
The Empire is German/Roman.
Turbans do not fit either of those.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks ago
Don’t worry, a lot of people think they are. (they basically are.)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks ago
Yes, there is a ship!
there’s also something else which no one who knows this culture and should think this is odd has picked up on yet.Yes, there are children, and an arena and wolves……….
Julian loves horses. His brother loved them too.
So, which brother is the more outgoing, and which one is the more quiet one? I’m a…
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