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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
oh good. lololol.
The way that he says dunderheaded in the Scottish accent in the drama! Priceless!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
He did, in his way. And he’ll address it again soon enough.
WHAT!?!? You don’t like that one? (or are you choking with laughter?)
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP Suggestion in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 8 months ago
I love your new profile picture!!! Did you draw that?
Thank you!
No, I did not draw this one. It’s from a comic strip called ‘Customer Service Wolf’ that I recently discovered. As someone who works in retail, I found it relatable and funny.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
yeah. They’re tall. Just not tall as Ardentans.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
So, Ardentans are very tall. (Averaging on the higher end of six feet for men, and the lower end of six feet for women)
The people of the Empire are more average, perhaps a little on the shorter side. Leon and Julian are considered tall in their country, but they are only about the height of average Ardentan women.
Lol. I just always…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty
NEXT SECTION! 2
It was after sunset, and Julian and Leon were walking alone in the dim light. “So, how should we go about this?” Julian asked.
“I say the same as we did when on the run in Ardenta. We’ll try to get a place to sleep with a family, shar…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty
NEXT SECTION!
(In case anyone hasn’t noticed, I’m starting out small because this is the beginning after all. I think the sections will get bigger soon, and I’ll also maybe post some more today.)
Julian sat down on a rock by the path and drew in several dee…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
It would be you who figured it out. Everyone else has read these books, and then you swoop in and find it! haha!
I am.
Empirians!
*dies*
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
HA! Got it!!
Ardentan’s have a French/Irish/English culture.
The Empire is German/Roman.
Turbans do not fit either of those.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Don’t worry, a lot of people think they are. (they basically are.)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Yes, there is a ship!
there’s also something else which no one who knows this culture and should think this is odd has picked up on yet.Yes, there are children, and an arena and wolves……….
Julian loves horses. His brother loved them too.
So, which brother is the more outgoing, and which one is the more quiet one? I’m a…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
You know who Lindsey Stirling is? Lol, yeah, I did have a picture of someone with a violin and like a library at some point, so that checks out.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
So, what do you think of the mood board for the book? Any ideas/deductions/predictions?
also, do you have any questions for me concerning anything that may have happened in the other books or points you’re confused on?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
I know! I think I did a pretty good job!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Ha!! Power and I go at one another now and then, but we’re friends. He actually is the one who got me into doing medieval swordplay.
I think our personalities clash, and people who don’t know us think it’s a fight, when really we’re just sparing.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
oh it was super tough. I decided that you had brown hair, a friendly, cheerful, slightly more outgoing personality. Loved animals, lived in the country, and liked western/countryish style clothing.
*shrug*
I decide lots of things about people I don’t know because me mind likes to have a face to go with a name, and when I don’t…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Haha. I was more riled up about the insult to my brothers, not to me. haha!
And I believe the Scottish jab was a playful one. *shrug* I have no hard feelings towards him, and he has none towards me.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
I think it was, because I was trying to guess what you were like based on your profile pic.
Where I first remember meeting you more was during the Short Story Contest War. I was like, “I like this girl!” Scottish…your firey debate with Power…your writings…
Haha! That’s great!
Wait….. what debate with Power? I don’t recall one…..…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
You know what, I was just thinking about something.
wasn’t the first time we “met” when I helped you figure out how to add a signature quote?
(random thought.)
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