Liberty

I’d love some help if you guys have any tips or advice to contribute 👆😊

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I don’t want to make a whole other topic for this, so I’m posting my question(s) here. XD

So, I’m having some trouble editing my WIP. (This is not my NaNo WIP. I was ahead on NaNo, so I decided to do some editing today). Originally, the first chapter wasn’t the most exciting. It was more a slice-of-life kind of thing that introduces who one of…[Read more]

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Nahim

“Peace?” Zahlin asked, lifting his forearm and pushing Nahim’s blade away from his neck. He lowered his Sword slightly. “You look like you’re half-dead with fatigue.”

Nahim put his blade inches from Zahlin’s stomach, ready for any last trick. He panted, his vision blurring off and on. Yeah, he was tired.

H…[Read more]

@jonas

I’m not huge into  Star Wars either, especially the recent stuff. I much prefer other movies. Especially considering music! Whoever thought the Star Wars music was cool? (Besides the theme)

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CRYSTAL SWORDS, The weapon of Thurston.

Twelve-year-old Nahim cast little bits of metal and crystal across a rough floor in disgust. He hung his head, every minute of free time he had gone to his little private hiding hole and labored over this project for months, and yet he had no progress to show it. He figured a last piece of red…[Read more]

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Hold on…I think I can quickly grab something on crystal swords…

@jonas

Short answer: no.

Long answer: The shape and color of a crystal sword is determined by the color and sometimes shape of the “baby crystal”. They come in all colors and multicolors, with the Realn Emperor’s looking like you took the Arken Stone and turned it into a sword (descriptions from book and movie). Nahim used to use only red, then…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

Yeah! Lol! The good ol’ days when our characters didn’t have blurred vision and weren’t bleeding!

Lag…ugh tech!

We’re just talking about our charries passing out, dying, and how to make them stop…we are soooooo normal!

@highscribeofaetherium

I don’t think they would die, just pass out.

Though, Nahim probably would deny he was hurting, since he doesn’t like anyone but a Realn helping him out usually in such matters. And Nora’s around, he never likes her worrying about him.

@jonas

I think they need medical care and a talking to at the same time!

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See ya in a few mins, be back!

So….that leaves Zahlin

@highscribeofaetherium

Nahim would only offer peace now if circumstances were much different, like Zahlin losing a leg. Nahim wouldn’t offer peace if he was about to die, cuz he sees that as weak.

@highscribeofaetherium

Okay. At least this shall end and our charries won’t die.