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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago
Ummmm I was the one who keeps getting your story COMPLETELY WRONG!!! Sorry again…….I feel soooo bad 😔😔
Don’t feel bad! It means I have a few things to make clearer. I won’t be around to correct every reader. lol.
(AND Aaron acts older than Turin XD)
Aaron is more mature then Turin.
I think I’d just like to see more of Aaron…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago
Ummmm I was the one who keeps getting your story COMPLETELY WRONG!!! Sorry again…….I feel soooo bad 😔😔
Don’t feel bad! It means I have a few things to make clearer. I won’t be around to correct every reader. lol.
(AND Aaron acts older than Turin XD)
Aaron is more mature then Turin.
I think I’d just like to see more of Aaron’s flaws whether…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 2 years, 2 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @anyone_else_whos_intereste
               Against All Odds Playlist!!
1.) Jonathan: h ttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s_WNDIybIXs
2.) Jack: h ttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bwvRaHmn694
3.) Villain: h ttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IskFoAob2wY&list=PL61EA7836AA4687F1&index=6
4.) Main ship: There is none.…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint
Ok, here’s the next part….. and then things get bad. lol.
Morning dawned, and after breakfast and a time of prayer, the men and boys went off to train with the soldiers.
Turin was a born fighter, and the way of the sword seemed natural and easy to him. Aaron, on the other hand, found sword craft less to…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago
Okay, but you clearly said he did have a temper earlier, and @shadow said she liked it.
He was frustrated as anyone would be in the circumstances…… Turin is the one with the wicked temper around here. You can be someone who is naturally very easy going, but who does lose their temper in a certain situation, or at least gets f…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint
ok crazies…. here is TURIN who is a TEENAGER and DOESN’T have a beard.

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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago
ok crazies…. here is TURIN who is a TEENAGER and DOESN’T have a beard.

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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Howdy Light! I can’t remember if we’ve met, but welcome back!!
I’m excited to see some of your stuff, so tag me if you post anything!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago
Oh my goodness YOU GUYS!!!
OK, in the begining I said that Aaron was 18!! Turin was a year or two older Sabina was 16! Does that fix it???
I would suggest setting this story on Earth. You can still keep the country names, it can just be an alternate reality of Earth where there used to be countries with those names. Your world and ours are…
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 LIGHHTTTTTTTTTTT *TACKLE HUG* 💖💖💖💖💖
GIRL, GIRL, GIRLLLLLLLL!!!! I’VE MISSED YOU SO MUCHHHHHHH😭😭😭💖💖 I’m SOOOOO happy to hear you’re doing well though!!!!
AND TYYYYYYYYYY. I’M sooooo EXCITED for the release of Freedom’s Fire 🤩🤩🤩
It’s been good. Busy, but good!! Had more time with extended family lately which has been a…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Oh my gosh rowing classes? Like canoeing?? That sounds so cool. I’m glad you’ve been able to enjoy it now that you’re warming up to it!!
Actually, it’s much cooler than that! It’s the type you use for competitive sports. Some colleges do it, but I believe it’s mainly up here in New England. So far I’ve done sweeping, scull…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Also, I like your forum signature.
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Jep
“Er, no offense, of course, Miss Jep.”
“None taken. I’m sure you’ll quickly see I’m not like other girls.”
Um, I think we can just go for it. Chase’s and Sef’s converse has slowed and I don’t really know how continue at the moment. So I’m ready for some action, unless, of course @savannah_grace2009 isn’t.
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Hi!
I had to temporarily quit horseback riding and anything to do with physical strain (the doom of an active farm girl teen) because of three tick-borne diseases right after each other. Didn’t help I never had been on antibiotics before so my immune system was not pleased. Oh, and NEVER bite down on Doxycycoline (if I’m…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 2 years, 2 months ago
Okay! 😊
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
That was what I wanted you to see first!!!!
Thank you! Yeah I wanted it to be different for all of them.
My intention was: the girl on the far left just looks broken, and the guy beside her looks horrified, and as if he can’t bare what’s happening. Then the kid laying over the dead guy is obviously sobbing. the Guys standing is kinda…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 2 years, 2 months ago
Not yet! Hopefully I can get to it soon! I’m familiar with some of the songs though!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 2 years, 2 months ago
I knew most of them, so once I listened through the first verse or so I switched.
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