Liberty

I didn’t really notice that the uncle’s betrayal felt forced, but I would have to go back and look at it again to see for sure. I was so preoccupied with Yeah, I knew that was gonna happen and Oh no—what’s gonna happen to them now? To really focus on it. Unless Linus feels otherwise, I think it was fine.

@ellette-giselle

Sorry this took me so long to respond—I didn’t get a notification, so I thought you hadn’t wrote back yet.

My first thought is that you would need to save Joseph, because it would be strange to kill off the main character three quarters (four fifths?) of the way through the book.

But looking past that, Joseph’s charact…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

I see. Maybe. lol.

Ooo, fan-fiction! Now I really should kill them all!

@ellette-giselle

All right then! I’ll write some scenes for those snowballs someone hit me with.

As for who I’d save… Why can’t they all live? XD

Really though. It depends on who I’m answering as: the reader or the writer. As the reader, I don’t want to see Joseph, Amelia, or Berik die. As the writer, I see a plausible reason for any of…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

Thank you so, so much! You’re so sweet!

@elishavet-pidyon

I like how this is going. I will be furious if you kill them, but also… I really like these scenes. The dungeons plus the hope that the Allied Armies will come in time is a great mix. I want to read more because I really don’t know which way it will go.

Thank you! I’m so glad you are enjoying the mix and the suspense is bui…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Yep, we’re behind. Absolutely wiped off the map, wot. It’s just the way it’s been, wot. Life, you know. The real wringer.

*Takes off hare ears* I like how this is going. I will be furious if you kill them, but also… I really like these scenes. The dungeons plus the hope that the Allied Armies will come in time is a great mix.…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

Thank you so much!

*laughs through tears* it’s a good kind of crying.

Sorry. I’ve been having a rough time, and I think God sent you to say that this morning. 😌

@lightoverdarkness6

REALLY!

I had no idea! (I’m tearing up now. haha)

@lightoverdarkness6

Really? Aw that makes me so happy!

I guess I’ll have to tag you next time I get hit with a snowball! lol.

@lightoverdarkness6

tag me if you ever post the whole things!

No prob. I’ve noticed a few of y’all still do. 😅

@whalekeeper

The closest I ever did was one of my older brother and sister (not really, but I call them that) I wrote a romance and I used some of the things I saw in their relationship and I also used their physical descriptions and a few personality traits. It was there enough that Kirsten recognized it and was over the moon, but when she told…[Read more]

@hybridlore

 

Joseph, Amelia, and Beric. I don’t know her brothers well enough yet.

What if you could only save one of those three?

(And I’m totally just being a beast because no matter what you say I’m not changing anything.)

Eh, I wasn’t surprised.

I didn’t think you would be surprised, I just wanted to know thoughts. Like does it mak…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Eh, I wasn’t surprised.

@ellette-giselle

Joseph, Amelia, and Beric. I don’t know her brothers well enough yet.

I’ve let myself be deceived. My whole life I thought I’d never have the strength, and I was right. But it’s not about me at all! None of this is.” Joseph waved his hand to punctuate his words. “My whole life I’ve been worried about what I can and can’t do, but…

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@hybridlore

No comment about the Uncle betraying them?

@hybridlore

Ellette!!!!! 🥺🥺

What are you going to do to them??

lol. Wouldn’t you like to know?!

Who would you be the most upset about if I wipe them all out?

Glad the scene is good.

Preachy? In what way?

I can’t wait to see what happens next. 🥺

That emoji contradicts those words. l…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

That is so cool!

I do that sometime, but it’s mostly with personality, though sometimes I keep physical character descriptions that fit.

Good scenes, though. Joseph was a tiny bit preachy when he had his character shift arc, but it worked since that’s been his struggle since the beginning.

I can’t wait to see what happens next. 🥺