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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Executing a teenager and a pregnant woman is something even I would shy away from writing lol
hmmmmm.
I’ve killed my fare share of teenagers….. and a few little kids……………..
but yeah I like the hymn at the back idea! maybe if you have any recipes, or games, or other things that you put an emphasis on through the story,…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
wow! haven’t heard from you in a little while! I was wondering if you were still reading!
I think I plan to keep it. It honestly is a very special thing and a special part of the story, and I feel like it really shows their faith as whole as embodying some of the key messages of the book. I have actually ended each of the books in this…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Kate DiCamillo in the forum Book Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
I read Narnia, but other then that I read mostly fiction set in our world or a fantasy world that was basically earth alternate reality with no weird creatures just a bunch of artistic liberty.
The only other Kate DiCamillo book I know for sure I’ve read is Because of Winn-Dixie.
Oh wait, I read that one. I didn’t like i…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago
that doesn’t matter. We all have a learning curve. I hate some of the drawings I have on here, but that doesn’t matter. Plus, you can get helpful feedback and/or encouragement!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
You can’t leave me hanging there!! 😖 Although, I’m wondering if I want to know what happens next.
No real changes to the scene that I could think of. The one hymn is pretty long, but if you want to include it all, that’s fine.
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Ruth replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
SERIOUSLY?!
Lol, I guess I have to write now…. I’ll be back when i have something
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago
@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @highscribeofaetherium @grcr
thx
WHY HAVE YOU NOT BEEN POSTING YOUR ART!!!???
Because I’m gonna hate these drawings, and then they’ll be forever on here. Besides, they’re far from perfect.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @grcr
12/31/24
NEXT SECTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The next morning, Joseph was startled awake by the sound of keys jangling in the lock. He sat up quickly, jolting Amelia awake.
Beric rolled over and yawned.
At the other side of the room, David was a…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Kate DiCamillo in the forum Book Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
That’s me with War Horse. The book was told from the horse’s perspective and was very confusing and somewhat uninteresting because the horse sometimes had horse limitation and sometimes could think like a person. But the movie was amazing because you can see everything the horse is seeing.
I do like some fantasy. But…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
I’m currently writing Baron’s story in the form of an anthology series. I’ll post it when I’m done
*gaspeth*!!!
Yes please!!!!
No, it’s just because idk who i want to hit yet so I’m stashing them away
oh dear………
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Oh my goodness! I want to read more and more and more! I want to see the part where Baron gets his scar!!
Thank you for tagging me!
You’re welcome.
I’m currently writing Baron’s story in the form of an anthology series. I’ll post it when I’m done
Oh, btw, you never hit anyone with snowballs!
That’s because I’m…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago
okay, I’m done
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago

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Ruth changed their profile picture 1 year, 8 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago
Oh dear, I know I’m gonna regret posting this

This is a type of board for Baron, but my scanner didn’t do it any favors, in fact I think it looks terrible this way. Sorry
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