Liberty

@highscribeofaetherium @jonas @savannah_grace2009

Ohhh, boy, Zahlin is going to be mad.

Another fight. Here we go, and this time it’s going to be REALLY interesting.

Nora

Nora watched the new girl, Kate, follow Ottoline out the door.

“We should all go. I have a feeling poor Ottoline will get into trouble. Besides, why don’t we all annoy the guys if we are going to?”

She got up, grabbing her pillow and leaving her helmet behind. “Let’s go give the boys a little bit of feathers!”

@jonas

Also, didn’t you know girls have a sixth sense? That’s how our moms always somehow know we were getting into trouble when we were little.

Boys are dangerous, especially armed with real weapons.

Besides, girls know when to watch the back of a friend ad not send them alone.

@jonas @savannah_grace2009

A hunch

That would be fun

@jonas

all girls rush in with pillows

@jonas

I’m not going to be around much today, but I will see if I can hop on a little bit late this afternoon.

@whalekeeper

Sybil

Sybil noticed Moon swaying slightly, and she quickly reached out to steady him before he could pass out. She turned to the servant who had addressed Mrs. Baumann.

“Could you bring some water out here for Moon, as well?” she asked. The servant nodded and hurried off, and Heinrich Baumann stepped briskly over to his wife. Gra…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I really like how you started to introduce your villain like that.

@jonas

Should I later bring in one of my villains?

@freedomwriter76

It may be a while before I have Leo, I’ve never been so frustrated with a man’s facial features. I’ll let you know when I figure it out. 🙂

Glace

Glace Firehead sighed as he stepped out of his portal into his “home” base; his apartment far away from his real home. Far from his father. Far from Gloria. Far from the center of the Fettian Empire. It was the life he had to live, since that incident.

Dropping the satchel from his shoulder to the floor, he slumped into a chair, tired…[Read more]

Oh, and the reason I’m not doing the fun part of his life, is I want to build on the part that’s giving me headaches.

@jonas @savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium

I think I shall add Glace, since he got two votes and I know him better than Cash.

Glace Firehead is a type three on Cloaked Mystery’s list. He used to be very optimistic and rebellious.

Oh, wait, I should start his profile with what he looks like…

Tall, about six foot six, with a handsome…[Read more]

@jonas

XD

@smiley @freedomwriter76 @whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009

Sybil

When the tablecloth went up in flames and Moon stomped it out, Matilda Baumann immediately took a seat and began fanning herself in distress. Sybil quickly made her way to the woman’s side to comfort her.

“My beautiful tablecloth from India,” Matilda mourned. “It cost a pretty…[Read more]

@grcr

This looks really interesting!! I’m excited to see more of this, I think the characters have a lot of potential!

I think some of the dialogue from Blair seems a little forced, if that makes sense.

Mainly just this paragraph:

“I know, but I really hate the shallow conversations.” He moaned, “I never feel like I can express my opini…

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@esther-c

Of course! Glad you like it!!